That was great! But just to make a suggestion and I don't mean it harshly, but it was a little boring dear. Add more so it's not going too much by the book? I love the story, I love your flare. I just wanna see more of that flare that makes the story so great :D
gah the feels of year one being almost done Rosalie is perfect i cant wait!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! update soon pretty please with a yummy strawberry on top (since i hate cherries)
awh i love Christmas time(: i love her gift she got <3 its perfect, having a locket of her mother and father and harry from 10 years ago(: keep up the amazing good work also who can resist CHOCOLATE!!!!!!