Oh my goodness. I think I died of happiness a little inside when he said,"I'm going to marry you one day, Fi." Just.. D'awwh. ;u; This story is so great. You can tell, because usually I'm reading hardcore smut stories. & I was EXCITED that they didn't jump into the bed together right after they kissed. Well, in that way I mean. You're taking it just slow enough that it's nerve racking, but not annoying. If that makes sense? I think the only even slight negative thing that I can come up with about this story is your use of exclamation points. xD I feel like they're always yelling! But it's still an amazing story! Please don't stop writing. <3
@ thelostgirl00 this comment legit made me smile like a mad bastard. thanks so much i really really appreciate everything you said! i tried to make the story as 1 - realistic and 2 - original as possible and i'm so glad you appreciate that! currently in the middle of the next update and it's just for youuuu :D xxx
I adore this story. You're an amazing writer. Plus its a much more original idea. It gets boring reading about merch girls and photographers all the time. Making her a fashion designer was a cool idea. :3 I can't wait to see where it goes from here. Plus I love her and Austin's relationship. Even though I can't wait for them to become more. Eep. <3
@ thelostgirl00 yay thanks so much :) i'm glad you like it! i'm having enormous technology problems at the minute but i'll try my best to have the next chapter uploaded today :D thanks again :D xx