The City of Angels. - Comments

  • thelostgirl00

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    Psh, I love you too. <3
    January 31st, 2014 at 03:08am
  • heffipie

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    @ thelostgirl00
    i love you, haha.
    thanks for the observation :D i'll take it into account :D
    xxx
    January 30th, 2014 at 06:09pm
  • thelostgirl00

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    Oh my goodness. I think I died of happiness a little inside when he said,"I'm going to marry you one day, Fi." Just.. D'awwh. ;u; This story is so great. You can tell, because usually I'm reading hardcore smut stories. & I was EXCITED that they didn't jump into the bed together right after they kissed. Well, in that way I mean. You're taking it just slow enough that it's nerve racking, but not annoying. If that makes sense? I think the only even slight negative thing that I can come up with about this story is your use of exclamation points. xD I feel like they're always yelling! But it's still an amazing story! Please don't stop writing. <3
    January 30th, 2014 at 05:03pm
  • thelostgirl00

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    Psh, d'awwh. <3 Well since no one else is commenting I'm just going to give you feedback after every update to make up for it. >:3
    January 30th, 2014 at 04:54pm
  • heffipie

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    @ thelostgirl00
    this comment legit made me smile like a mad bastard.
    thanks so much i really really appreciate everything you said!
    i tried to make the story as 1 - realistic and 2 - original as possible and i'm so glad you appreciate that!
    currently in the middle of the next update and it's just for youuuu :D xxx
    January 30th, 2014 at 12:15am
  • thelostgirl00

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    I adore this story. You're an amazing writer. Plus its a much more original idea. It gets boring reading about merch girls and photographers all the time. Making her a fashion designer was a cool idea. :3 I can't wait to see where it goes from here. Plus I love her and Austin's relationship. Even though I can't wait for them to become more. Eep. <3
    January 30th, 2014 at 12:02am
  • heffipie

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    @ thelostgirl00
    yay thanks so much :) i'm glad you like it!
    i'm having enormous technology problems at the minute but i'll try my best to have the next chapter uploaded today :D
    thanks again :D xx
    January 28th, 2014 at 03:39pm
  • thelostgirl00

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    I looooove this. Oh my goodness.
    January 27th, 2014 at 10:57pm