Lock the Door - Comments

  • kittenlzlz1

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    Yeah I know, I was thinking of maybe doing a reboot? Cuz I've come to the point where i'm pretty pissed at myself for writing it quickly and messily. Wink
    May 4th, 2014 at 05:56pm
  • ShotToRemember

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    you're writing is good and the storyline is decent too, I just can't stand the fact that Gerard already thinks he loves frank when he's only had one (short) conversation with him. I got to chapter four I think and I'm gonna stop now:/ keep writing, though, because your style has promise. you just need to work out the happy medium of reality and romance, ya know?
    January 25th, 2014 at 06:35pm
  • kittenlzlz1

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    Yay! Thankyou :) I'll be updating soon
    January 23rd, 2014 at 03:28am
  • HarleyHomicide

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    I like te story so far! Can't wait for another update
    January 22nd, 2014 at 10:40pm