I really loved this. Especially since I have a really dark mind it kind of stuck there. I like how you put such a deep description in the story, I could almost feel like I was actually there. I liked that he didn't know weather to be entirely happy about his kill or absolutely disgusted. It seems like something a real killer would feel.
"And it tasted disgustingly sweet."
Loved it. I wish there were more to go on this and that I knew more about the main character and what he was thinking, but maybe the whole point is to not over think. Never the less this is a great read and you're an amazing writer.
"And it tasted disgustingly sweet."
Loved it. I wish there were more to go on this and that I knew more about the main character and what he was thinking, but maybe the whole point is to not over think. Never the less this is a great read and you're an amazing writer.