Take Away My Innocence - Comments

@ Rose91
Thank you so much! I hate abandoning stories and I only do when I can't come up with a good ending or the storyline isn't what it turned out to be and lost my muse. I haven't lost any of that for this story or any of my thee active stories. Crossing my fingers that I can get some time to write one of these days.

I understand everybody has a life outside of mibba. I just love your writing!! Hopefully everything will turn around for you

@ Rose91
I'm so sorry! I've put so many of these stories on hold since my life is out of control at the moment. Slowly, but surely they are being worked on. These stories sadly aren't my priority, work and school is and I feel guilty for not updating, but this is for my leisure time. I do promise that these are NOT ABANDONED.

When are you going to update?!?!?!?! Please update soon!!!!!

Please update! :)

@ ParanormalLuver
Thank you! I was so nervous knowing there lacked a bit of spark in the beginning before I really hit my stride again. I don't want to make this boring but I need to build Michael and Remi's relationship before anything happens. Remi is still hung up on Wyatt. You know typical teenager-y stuff

As always this story delivers! Hopefully Wyatt is out of the picture for good because that was just plain selfish of him. I love that Remi is a typical teen with a not so typical temptation in Michael. Look forward to reading what happens next.

@ nirvana-samsara
Let them begin. Yes it was disgusting what Wyatt did. he wanted it fast and didn't care about taking it slow. It's going to start getting good

And let the games begin. Wyatt is pathetic and disgusting for what he did. He knew how uncomfortable she was and yet he chose to be selfish and unsympathetic towards her. Remi needs to stay away from him. He's far too immature to be with her. Without Sigrun being around and Wyatt being disrespectful, Michael and Remi are going to get closer.

hope you update soon! xo

@ BlueDreams
We will see. Remi's mom has been busy but Michael might share what happened to speed up the process of remi not being with Wyatt. Who knows what will happen. I don't know haha

Oh my... this is going to get ugly for Wyatt, I have a feeling. I don't think Remi will tolerate him for much longer and she does deserve a different kind of relationship. Michael is also being protective so let's see what happens and if Remi's mom will play any part in this.

@ nirvana-samsara
Thank you for your kind words. She should leave him but considering she's a teen. Everyone knows how that goes. It turns into a constant on and off relationship or they tolerate it or give into that pressure f wanting to grow up too soon. It does say in the title and I don't think it's going to be shocking when she does make rash and stupid decisions.

I feel for Remi. She just wants to blend in and not stand out so much. She doesn't realize that her being different from the other teens makes her special. She doesn't need to conform. Her boyfriend is immature. You've been with your girlfriend for 9 months and that's how you treat her. You know how uncomfortable she is with being sexual and being around the type of people who drink and smoke. For some reason you think bringing her to a party is smart. She needs to leave him. You leave her in front of your house because you got scared. He should have stood by her side and explained what happened. Made sure she was ok. Hope Michael tells her what he did. She obviously can't trust him to have her best interest. Great chapter. I was nervous and uncomfortable for her. I just kept hoping she made it home safe. Glad Michael was home.

Amazing so far! Please update :) xx

@ BlueDreams
Haha that's all she does really

That's it Remi, just keep feeding the ego haha

@ teenagedream91
That's what I like about it, it's not rushed or outlandish it's probable and believable.

@ ParanormalLuver
Thank you :) I try not to make it all perfect or cliche like remi having an all around shitty boyfriend and she is driven into the arms of an older man. Hopefully I do this right and not ruin it haha. I try to make it as teenager-y as possible with Wyatt and remi

This is such a good combination of mysteriousness and real struggles. So glad I found this, cannot wait for more!