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  • oogalaboogala42

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    @hopelesslullabies thank you so much! It really means a lot xx Thanks for the advice, I'll change it up a bit(:
    February 15th, 2014 at 03:59am
  • fangirl.

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    This is amazing. Really. (:
    I love it.
    Subscribed and recommended.
    The only thing I'd advise is to put spaces between dialogue and every paragraph.
    February 14th, 2014 at 11:30pm
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