Jupiter's Moon - Comments

P.S. This entire paragraph killed me, okay? Like I seriously was like by the time I got done reading it. Like, I am going to die when I tell him about Geng.

"He'd die Kylee," those words nearly echoed in her ear, "Do you understand what I'm telling you? You're the only woman he's ever slept with and you two don't even have those sentimental nights anymore. You're the only woman he's ever bowed down to and he'd kiss your feet. He loves you so much that every time I tried to tell him that you were fucking him over, I couldn't. Junsu's the happiest man when he's with you. And without you, I don't see him living actually. And I know you're full of shit when you say that Junsu doesn't give you attention. It's bullshit, Kylee, you can't fool me. Fact of the matter, you're in love with Geng and not Junsu. And you really shouldn't have waited thirty-two years to now stress over this. You gave up your first born son," Yoochun lowered his voice as Jaejoong now hung up his call, "and the love of your life for Junsu who you never loved at all.

This is just genius. My heart.

Okay, Yoochun...let's get this straight.

I AM A SHIT MOTHER AND WIFE, BUT YOU DON'T HAVE TO RUB IT IN MY FACE, OKAY? Seriously, he hurt my feelings with his horrid honesty.

But I hope to god Kysu doesn't screw up anymore with Yooki. What he did was good for him being a prideful individual so I hope they can be friends again. Maybe more. I don't know. I like how Yooki is with Lee, but Kysu....UGH. SO COMPLICATED.

I really like this, it's a really emotion filled piece, and your wording is amazing, which adds to the feels that the story holds. Good job :)

I approve of my maternal instincts in this chapter. KYSU, QUIT BEING A DICK. MY GOD. But I just went "aww" at Junsu's caring nature for Yooki. He just wants her to be happy, despite if that meant her marrying Lee instead.

But the way Kysu treats Chansung. Can I just punch him in the face? -.- Like seriously. Its so infuriating! WHERE DID I GO WRONG? THIS SHIT.

Kysu, you are a man whore. I am ashamed to call you my son with your rotten attitude! How dare you talk about Yooki that way? She's the love of your life! And Han Lee, I applaud you and your punching of my son in the stomach. God bless you, boy. Maybe that will knock him down a peg. Good thinking, Yooki, on your part. And I like Bae. Maybe that's because his father is a sexy fucker, but I like how Bae has a pretty cool head. I approve of his and Sooyoung's relationship. I think I just spelled her name wrong. Oh, well.

I have not commented in anything in forever; I'm out of practice. ._.

Omg, Kysu and Yooki are so cute together and when Yooki accidently smooshed my cake I felt really bad, but was still so touched by it. If only Han Lee and Kysu could get along... And that moment with Yooki and Junsu was so sweet and heartbreaking and Minki I just

KYSU FINALLY ADMITTED AND SO DID YOOKI. YES, SO MUCH YES RIGHT NOW. Ugh, I was waiting for this. And the talk that Junsu and Kysu had was so sweet. My heart hurts. And I go crying to Han. But he called me baby. I mean...Kysu and Yooki, yes! But Lee and Yooki... :c

Ugh, so many emotions!
The whole thing with Yooki and her letter to Yoochun was heartbreaking. I could totally relate to it and it just broke my heart and made m cry!!

But Junsu being the over-possessive father made it better. c: I love how I just take control of him when he gets out of hand, hahaha.

OMG. NO. KYSU, BB. ITS OKAY. SHE'LL FALL IN LOVE WITH YOU INSTEAD OF LEE. I HOPE. UGH, MORE HEARTBREAK. WHY?

I saw like one grammar mistake in PARK YOOKI's chapter and I thought I might as well point it out! xD
California has always been my home, but thank god I get to leave and not see your worthless face's any longer. Face's should be just faces. Cause it's not possessive or anything. It's just plural 'face', right?

And the speech toward her mother at the end. Just wow. =o You portrayed the emotions there really well.

why don't you shut the hell up and go do something proper with your life, like waxing your mustache LOL this kid

Great! We only have five of them! I'M LAUGHING SO HARD when did 5 cats become not that many

this is really cute, by the way. you developed your characters really well, and your dialogue is hilarious.

Junsu was adorable with trying to punish Yooki. That was a total fail.

And me being all motherly and emotional with Lee. I really can't. I just really, really can't. Because Lee like totally changes around me and its so sad and heartbreaking because I'm his mother and he doesn't even know it.

I get what Geng said, but at the same time it was kinda harsh. But he Lee came in and saved me!

And the convo between Lee and Yooki was just, ugh. I can't. Legit had tears in my eyes when he was talking about no one understanding him. *sobs* So perfect!

YUNHO'S DAUGHTER IS NICE. WHAT.

"I don't live that far away from your aunt's place so..." Well, isn't that convenient?

Awww, I like all the things Lee says about me.

WHHHHHHHHHHHHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
DID THEY JUST FUCKING KISS. WHAT. WHAT WAHHAHAHJSDFA;KLSDFKSADF!

AUNT KYLEE IS NOT PLEASED.

Every time Yoochun makes an appearance, I want to just crawl under my blanket and cry! And the whole thing between him and Yooki before he left. I was sitting in Einstein's when I read this the first time and I about started crying, no joke! I just love how Junsu has kinda taken over as her dad; its so sweet. :'c

Ugh, and then Lee. How can I even express these feels?!? HOW?!?! When he started crying, I legit couldn't again. And he wants to meet me his mother... WHY MUST THIS BE SO HEARTBREAKING?

I applaud Junsu on how he handled the situation. Yeah, he was harsh, but Kysu needed a kick in the pants! And he got it.
But omg...Yooksu moment!!! I loved it. I so, so, so, SO loved it. They're so innocent and perfect! Ugh, my heart.

Yay, an update!!!!! I really enjoyed this chapter. Lee being emotional!? :o And I really wish Kysu and Yookie get together already.. but I'm also willing to give Yookie and Lee a chance if it works well between the two. I wonder what will happen when Lee finds out Kylee is his mother...

More feels! NIKKI KNOWS I'M CHEATING ON JUNSU AND SHE HASN'T DONE ANYTHING, WHAT? That's crazy.

And I was so saddened that Nikki actually showed she loved her daughter and was heartbroken with her leaving. And then she talks about her relationship with Yoochun and Yooki and its heartbreaking.

And when Junsu said "our daughter", my heart like flew from my chest! *sobs*

This story kills me inside!

Thanks for updating! That was such a huge plot twist - I didn't see that coming. My emotions are all mixed up.

*screams in pure agony* MY HEART. I CAN'T TAKE THIS. *clutches chest* I'M SUCH A HORRIBLE PERSON, WHY? *insert sad Junsu puppy*

Ugh, Yooki. stop trying to be tough and just let Kysu take care of it. Lee is a douche and Kysu will put him in his place bc Kysu cares! LET KYSU CARE.

HANNI, I'M SORRY. I'M SO, SO SORRY. I'm like falling apart right now. I can't function correctly. Nope nope nope. .-.

This is absolutely amazing! Can you update soon please??

I loved Kysu and Junsu and omg! Junsu made me want to cry when he cried and when Yooki asked if she could call him "abeoji", I just sat there like "". And Lee needs to sit his butt down and get an attitude check! >:c

This. is. stunning. how you describe everything is just breathtaking, you have a way of describing how people look in such an interesting way and it really comes to life. Sometimes your sentences start to get a bit choppy, but I think it really works for this piece. Also the inner monologue that is going on with the main character is just really well written. This story is great!

This. is. stunning. how you describe everything is just breathtaking, you have a way of describing how people look in such an interesting way and it really comes to life. Sometimes your sentences start to get a bit choppy, but I think it really works for this piece. Also the inner monologue that is going on with the main character is just really well written. This story is great!