Just on a roll with checking out your stuff. I like this as well, and this is a longer story! Bummed you never continued with it, though. If you ever choose to pick it up again, I will be here to read. This definitely deserved other feedback; I'm surprised I'm the first one commenting. It has a really promising plot line, so I'll be interested in seeing where it goes if you choose to continue. Been a while since I've seen anyone try to work with this type of idea; him being a dad, I mean. So it would be awesome to see it continued. But at the very least, wanted to let you know that I'm here and do like what you have of it. You're a great writer. :)
Bummed you never continued with it, though. If you ever choose to pick it up again, I will be here to read. This definitely deserved other feedback; I'm surprised I'm the first one commenting.
It has a really promising plot line, so I'll be interested in seeing where it goes if you choose to continue. Been a while since I've seen anyone try to work with this type of idea; him being a dad, I mean. So it would be awesome to see it continued.
But at the very least, wanted to let you know that I'm here and do like what you have of it. You're a great writer. :)