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hi! holy crap i'm so glad i came here!!

i don't know much about Hayley and Oli in real life, but you definitely captured their relationship v v beautifully here! ever since the description about their lovely mornings, and even the way you revealed that they're engaged, i absolutely love it. i love how you took the readers to these cute lil journeys just by talking about their tattoos.

omg that razor one tho.

i totally grasped their personalities as individual characters just by the way they respond to each other's jokes, how they touch and look at each other. i so adore the descriptive imagery and the lil details that you slipped in. the way you made Oli describe Hayley shows how in love he is with her, and that makes me fall in love with him too.

v v v nice!

Another Hayliver fic!

I really love the detail in this story, it gives a really good vivid imagery and the description adds to the emotion. I really loved this because it game me a warm feeling, it was a cute read! :3

You were totally right (not that I doubted you) about it being full of good feels.
My heart is like a melted chocolate heart of d'awh. I hope you know this.

Anyway, I am so glad that the story flowed so well; when they said their "I love you"s, there was an even more vivid image in my mind of how they looked when they said it. I think, to me, those were the most powerful forms of imagery---the ones where they simply responded to the other and I was able to fill in the gaps of the surroundings, the eye contact, & the energy.

Then of course Oli's personality came out even more well rounded than I thought humanely possible at the mention of the penis tattoo. Classic! I found myself reliving the moments described, especially when they were explaining not only the events surrounding the tattoos but the reasoning. Sentimentality and nostalgia? Totally feeling it.


It really is a story that I would read curled up with a mug of hoco or tea; it just has this safe, comforting vibe to it that I enjoyed thoroughly.

TL;DR I love this and you're amazing; don't ever question that.

goes to cry because goddangit it was perfect.

Can I say that the fact that Oli wasn't a morning person and yet he still liked mornings because of a certain someone is absolutely adorable and I love it and it's just the most wonderful thing oh my goodness.

“Yeah,” he nodded. “Every night you keep talking about how handsome and sexy I am. I mean, come on, tell me something I don’t know.” I choked. That is probably the best thing I have ever read and it's cute and it's funny and it's great and Oli stop but don't stop because I love you.

PENIS TATTOO OH MY GOODNESS I CRIED YES.

The first tattoo mentioned, the story that went along with it hurt multiple feelings and I squealed in sadness and then it morphed it into adorableness and all the stories of Hayley's tattoos were just so wonderful and I just love it and awwww, so great.

The ending was so sweet and adorable I melted into a puddle of helplessness and cute. This was sososo wonderful, like there were any doubts to be had, and I AM PROUD TO BE A HAYLIVER CHILD FOR I HAVE A GREAT HAYLIVER MOMMA.

((goodness i am so nervous to post my mile-long hayliver now))

This was gorgeous. I smiled like an idiot, and their banter about drooling and sleep talking! That was easily my favourite part.

I loved the way you described Hayley's tattoos, and their stories, so intricately woven to include a part of Oli's life too.

this was not only beautifully written, but one of the best Haylivers written to date. You go Hayliver momma. You go.