Oh wow I really love this! I fell in love with both characters right quick! They are so witty and playful I love it. You write such amazing stories dear =]
Ohh my god this just ripped my heart out. I am just aching with despair. Ugh this was so lovely. Such a good original idea and hot damn you wrote it so well. I am head over heels for your characters. I absolutely love the way they interacted with each other. It's so real and funny and sad. I like how Daniel thinks about things and how it's comedic but you can tell that this isn't going to be forever and I couldn't help thinking about what's going to happen when John want to all in love again and if Daniel will be around to have to watch that or would he be disappeared by then. Girl, this story just messed me up (in a good way)
I don't even know what to say. I didn't find a thing wrong with it. I seriously loved this. Thanks for entering my contest (you're the winner btw hehe)
This is seriously so lovely oh my gosh, I got so many emotions You're giving me feels man. I'd love to review it for the mibba magazine if you wouldn't mind? I think I've reviewed one of your stories before, if I'm not mistaken. Repeat customer here. Hello
I am a mess of emotions right now oh my god. It's so cute but then one day Daniel will disappear and nonono but John is so lovely i love him and them insulting each other constantly was perfect and basically I'm just crying at the loveliness you put in this like god so beautiful. I want to hug both of them forever :( <3<3<3