Humanity - Comments

I'm sure I have already told you this, but I'm going to say it again anyways. This is a wonderful story, and I can't wait for me. Keep up the wonderful work.

Woah! Was not expecting that, at first I thought the beginning was a little slow but half way through it picked up and I managed to lose myself in this story I can't wait to read more! :D

Oooh, an original fiction! This seems nice and different from many vampire fics on here, so already I like it! I love the uniqueness of each character. Henry seems like the ass of the two and Zac seems like the older brother to me. I'm sure that this'll make quite the interesting relationship between them as they get into quarrels later on, it'll be funny to see how it pans out! Winnie's character seems cute, but like Zac thought, she was like a kid having a tantrum. I love how he thought that she was too cute to be taken seriously! I laughed and actually thought the same. I'm curious as to why her ghost's there though, and as to why Zac wanted to lease the place when it was in such bad condition. I mean, even if there was a ghost, it's still pretty intriguing. Are they Ghost Hunter Vampires?! Pete seems like a sweet guy, my heart totally went out to him when he was talking about Winnie. I wonder if he ever tries to talk to Winnie or something. Oh, and the pictures in the characters tab are amazing. The guys are total hunks.

I think that this story has a lot of potential! I don't usually subscribe to original fics, but this one's caught my eye so far. I hope to see more soon! Great job!

This is wonderful. As I have said quite a few times before.