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  • PrincessAngelBunny

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    Thank you for the advice and I'm glad you enjoyed it. c:
    February 2nd, 2014 at 02:51pm
  • DarkestStorm

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    I liked this s lot. It wss written simple but it was nice. I do think the ending was rushed and you could have elanoratee at the end. I think it woulx read better if you skipped lines between paragraphs.
    February 2nd, 2014 at 09:20am
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