Heart on the Floor - Comments

Well this was cute. I want Liam for myself but I would have to say Team Liam. He makes me happy. Update soon :p

@ EmzyStilinski
I'm glad you enjoyed this, expect plenty more Liam action to come!

Oh I love this and I desperately want to snog Liam's face off. This story makes me so happy :)

I just started this and might I say, I love it! Your writing is great :)

@ EmzyStilinski
Don't worry I'm still alive, I'll hopefully have another update out tonight or tomorrow! And you gotta love that Liam Payne he is delicious :3 Thank you for the comment!

This was great even though im threatening to fall asleep right now. Please don't abandon me. I thought you died or got cut up or something. Oh I want to snog Liam Payne. I can't wait for the rest of the guys. Please update soon

@ firew0rks
Awwww thank you I'm glad you liked my comparison! Some interesting things are coming soon and I'm looking forward to the next chapter of your story as well ;)

Comparing Harry to a perfect cake on chapter 3 was awesome, I couldn't agree more haha! And he's soooo adorable. Keep it up, I can't wait for more :)

@ DeficientlyObscure
Oh Liam Payne, I just want to make out with his face and cant wait

@ DeficientlyObscure
Oh Liam Payne, I just want to make out with his face and cant wait

@ EmzyStilinski
There will actually be some Liam in the next chapter, be ready for all that yummy ness! ;) Thanks for the comment I'm glad your enjoying it so far!

Oh it was great. Harry is just amazing and adorableness. I would jump in this story just to get in on the amazing stuff. I would also kiss Liam but that's a different story. Update soon

@ always forever;
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it, I will be posting a new chapter sometime tonight or tomorrow!

I really LOVED this chapter, mainly because it's well written, develops a good character and the beginning to romance and AH it's adorable! I love this plot. :) With the grammar stuff, it wasn't bad, just a few things, but I think you did great !

@ always forever;
Thank you so much for the comment and for the advice I'm gonna try and keep that in mind, my computer and I are not on the best terms right now haha it doesn't always catch the keys I press. Update is now out give me your thoughts and I may have a few questions about the boys for the next chapter!

Awe :) This is super cute! First of all, welcome to the fandom! Once you get it, it's hard to get out :P Secondly, this is lovely and I think it's SUPER cute. I can see you doing, many good things with this story and I want it to succeed. :) If I had to suggest something it'd be to make sure you use punctuation in your quotes. It's a little thing, that I just noticed, but it's still good. Like, "Hi, I'm Morgan" try to make it "Hi, I'm Morgan,/." period or coma. :) But I love it and if you ever need anything to help you with the boys, I got you ;) hahah. I love it though, and I hope you update it soon.

~Morgan oxo

Sounds good

@ EmzyStilinski
Thanks for the comment and I will probably ask you some question as I get further into the story, I just recently got into One Direction and thought I'd give a Harry story a chance. :)

This is pretty good so far and I can't wait for more. If you need any help with Harry, I'm a really big Directioner lol like I know his birthday is today lol but I look forward to more