City of Love - Comments

@ galaxydefender;
thank you so much! I'm already working on the next chapter! :)

Minus the part that you made a mistake, I'm really sure I'd be interested to read more chapters. I'm excited from how your story will turn out!

@ everdeen oh I'm sorry! I didn't notice, thank you though! I promise to pay more attention to details. Thanks for the feedback!

Interesting, willing to read more

PS: i hate being a bitch, this is totally constructive criticism: you should pay more attention to details, like first she said she let her phone at home and then she said both of them turned off their phones in the flight, sorry.