Whore Life - Comments

  • Your grammar and spelling are both great, and this is really clear and easy to read! The second chapter got to me a bit, just ‘cause of the assholes you’ve had to deal with and their entitlement issues, which is frustrating in itself.

    “The problem is that we live in a society that a man feels it is appropriate to grip my throat, and why? Because his cock was in my hand? Because he had paid me?” I love this line. It perfectly sums up the misogynist bullshit that runs rampant in society, and props to you for being strong and defensive in the face of sexism. Keep up the great writing! :)
    May 12th, 2014 at 02:14am