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  • InMyOwnWorld

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    I absolutely enjoy reading this story. Brian and Ally are in love and having issues like anybody would. Can't wait to see what kind of plan they have to piss the newly weds!
    July 15th, 2014 at 01:55am
  • heathyrxmisery

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    omfg that was just too cute!!! Brian loves her!!!!! :)
    July 13th, 2014 at 08:06am
  • devilprice

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    @ pennycausesdread
    Thanks, honey. I appreciate your kind words! :))
    July 10th, 2014 at 11:43pm
  • pennycausesdread

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    That was great, finally glad they worked that out. Woo!
    July 10th, 2014 at 11:38pm
  • pennycausesdread

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    Whaaaatttttt. They know each other?! I'm pretty sure there was no reference to that, total surpriseeeee. Dun dun dun...
    July 3rd, 2014 at 10:28pm
  • heathyrxmisery

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    ahhhh wedding time :)
    July 3rd, 2014 at 07:11am
  • heathyrxmisery

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    well damn haha. I love their relationship, even though it is quite fucked they make up for it :)
    July 2nd, 2014 at 07:22pm
  • heathyrxmisery

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    Oh shit what's Jenna got herself into now???
    July 2nd, 2014 at 07:42am
  • pennycausesdread

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    Found this story today, and just finished the last chapter. A little confusing, Ally and Brian are like the weirdest couple ever, one minute they like each other, the next minute theyre ready for murder. Some one needs a serious wake up call! Can't wait for the next update!
    July 1st, 2014 at 11:20pm
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    Found this story today, and just finished the last chapter. A little confusing, Ally and Brian are like the weirdest couple ever, one minute they like each other, the next minute theyre ready for murder. Some one needs a serious wake up call! Can't wait for the next update!
    July 1st, 2014 at 11:19pm
  • melaniekgut

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    I'm a new reader and I don't know how it took me so long to find this story. I've read all 26 chapters in the last 12 hours and I'm hooked! Update soon :)
    June 29th, 2014 at 07:52pm
  • heathyrxmisery

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    love the new layout :) and it's about damn time for them 2!!!
    June 24th, 2014 at 08:32pm
  • heathyrxmisery

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    damn that left me speechless
    June 19th, 2014 at 05:32pm
  • InMyOwnWorld

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    Even drunk he knows there is definitly something strong between them!
    June 19th, 2014 at 01:58am
  • heathyrxmisery

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    holy fuck!!! shit's about to get intense!!! I hope nothing bad happens to Matt and Jenna even though that's a huge fuck up on her part. Maybe Brian and Al will finally talk things through
    June 18th, 2014 at 07:17pm
  • heathyrxmisery

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    That was pitiful on both ends :(
    June 12th, 2014 at 05:55am
  • InMyOwnWorld

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    Poor Brian... And Poor Ally! Seriously I don't know why when we are mad at someone we only want them to be hurt. They are both doing the same thing, the only result being both super hurt by the other. They need to seriously have a talk!
    June 12th, 2014 at 03:29am
  • shadowedgates.

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    I love this. Please update soon. Mr. Green
    June 12th, 2014 at 12:43am
  • InMyOwnWorld

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    Sounds like a real love/hate relationship going on with these two!Ok, maybe more hate than love but hey, it's better this way!! :P
    June 2nd, 2014 at 05:27pm
  • heathyrxmisery

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    shit's about to get real!!!
    May 30th, 2014 at 12:45am