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  • devilprice

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    Hey, no harm done, right? And I believe we'll find that one out soon enough. I'm planning on the grand opening in already next chapter. Cool
    May 29th, 2014 at 10:10pm
  • InMyOwnWorld

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    First, sorry for the spamming for my last comment, dumb computer froze and I overclicked on the submit button! Can't wait to see the evil bitch and what is Brian's excuse for all of this!
    May 29th, 2014 at 10:04pm
  • InMyOwnWorld

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    That's rude! You can't stop a cute and sexy moment like that! They were finally making out! I'm really addicted to this story so keep giving me my daily dose!! LOLL!
    May 28th, 2014 at 02:26am
  • InMyOwnWorld

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    That's rude! You can't stop a cute and sexy moment like that! They were finally making out! I'm really addicted to this story so keep giving me my daily dose!! LOLL!
    May 28th, 2014 at 02:25am
  • InMyOwnWorld

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    That's rude! You can't stop a cute and sexy moment like that! They were finally making out! I'm really addicted to this story so keep giving me my daily dose!! LOLL!
    May 28th, 2014 at 02:25am
  • InMyOwnWorld

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    That's rude! You can't stop a cute and sexy moment like that! They were finally making out! I'm really addicted to this story so keep giving me my daily dose!! LOLL!
    May 28th, 2014 at 02:25am
  • devilprice

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    Thank you love, you're comments really mean a lot to me!
    May 27th, 2014 at 09:15pm
  • heathyrxmisery

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    keep em rolling darling! it gets better and better with each update
    May 27th, 2014 at 08:53pm
  • heathyrxmisery

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    Congrats to Matt and Jenna :) can't wait to see how all this sexual tension ends up with Brian and Al ;p
    May 27th, 2014 at 05:05pm
  • InMyOwnWorld

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    First step to relationship: become bestfriends! Then Ally and Brian will be all over each other! Keep the chapters coming, you don't even know how much I love this story!
    May 26th, 2014 at 02:16am
  • Snezenka

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    I love this story! :) Please, continue. I´m looking forward to what will happen next :)
    May 25th, 2014 at 02:06pm
  • devilprice

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    Heh, Ally's not the one for apologies, she'd most likely kick him in the groin than say- I'm sorry. :D
    May 25th, 2014 at 10:49am
  • InMyOwnWorld

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    That's a good start for an apology! LOL! Can't wait! PLease keep updating everyday! :P
    May 25th, 2014 at 01:32am
  • heathyrxmisery

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    Only good thing about getting her own bar is if Andrew and Nikki are too much of a hassle she can get rid of them :) I think she'll do killer at it! Can't wait to read the apology to Brian and what he has to say to it
    May 23rd, 2014 at 07:00pm
  • Metalwhore

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    Update soon!
    May 23rd, 2014 at 09:11am
  • InMyOwnWorld

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    Kinda sucks that she has to deal with Andrew and NIkki in her own bar!
    Can't wait to see how she'll apologize to Brian!
    May 23rd, 2014 at 02:35am
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    Kinda sucks that she has to deal with Andrew and NIkki in her own bar!
    Can't wait to see how she'll apologize to Brian!
    May 23rd, 2014 at 02:35am
  • heathyrxmisery

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    Brian needs to get his shit together about if he's into Al or just wants to fuck. I feel bad for the poor girl
    May 22nd, 2014 at 02:00am
  • heathyrxmisery

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    awwee how sweet of Matt to look after her :) maybe he can knock some sense into her about Brian!
    May 21st, 2014 at 02:15am
  • heathyrxmisery

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    very good update :)
    May 20th, 2014 at 05:17am