@ Crystal2 Sorry it took so long to update, I've kinda been having some difficulties. Writing is my escape, so I thought I could get some real good stuff in, but my mind has been on my bestfriend lately, she um, isn't doing vert good. :/ hope you like it anyway lol.
@ LKBJA Obviously Billie is connected to Eliana, in a weird way, and obviously he's lying about Mike. It's all about him and Mike right now, and I'll have an update up by tonight hopefully. Glad you like it.
Okay, now I'm officially confused! What the hell is wrong with Billie, or, better yet, is something wrong with Billie or Mike? Update soon please, can't wait to read more
@ Dirntdirntdirnt Rock on then! However, being a writer of fan fiction for quite some time, I understand how important it is to clear up and specify each detail. There are thousands of ways you can phrase things as to keep it simple, yet giving basic information. Otherwise, people easily turn away and pin you as ignorant to the fandom when you absolutely are not! Perhaps he could have said something like "Well, their first mainstream album anyway," and possibly added a little crack at his dad about how the other two sucked (tho they didn't, lbr. 39/Smooth is my fucking life). They could quite frankly leave it at that just fine, lovie. I wouldn't say to change anything now, but just keep that in mind as you continue!
@poisonandblood Oh I know that, lol! It was just how I wanted the plot to go, I didn't want Joey telling her about that because Eliana didn't know Green Day that much, and Dookie is more "first album type-ish" anyway, so I didn't want her character to get confused. Lol
@countbitchula Well shit, thank you :)
@crystal2 AHHH I KNOW I'm FANGIRLING over my own fanfiction
Heads up, Dookie wasn't the first album, girl. There were two prior called 1,039/Smoothed Out Slappy Hours and Kerplunk!. Not a big deal, but I just thought you should know. xx