I Was Only Dreaming - Comments

That ending is just... Wow. Amazing writing as always, when I read this it's like I'm reading a actual book with the detail to conversations and describing Tré and his pyschopath ways ;) also titling the chapter after Let it Be, is Soooo awesome. I love that song. Keep writing!

@whatsername12 Haha thanks for reading xx and no, it's just a joke xD

i love this so much and still from earlier chapters i am still laughing about it p.s does her mom have a big butt!?!

i love this so much and still from earlier chapters i am still laughing about it p.s does her mom have a big butt!?!

@WhereMyDemonsHide aw thanks :D and this story is just beginning to get interesting

@LKBJA lol thanks. I wasn't going to have this al happen just yet but I figuered what the heck

Billie is like: "hey Jessie, so you're gonna have to break up with your beloved boyfriend and be with me instead, cuz there is a slight chance that baby might be mine. But y'know, that's no big deal!"

but seriously that was wow. Just wow.

keep it up ;)

Billie is like: "hey Jessie, so you're gonna have to break up with your beloved boyfriend and be with me instead, cuz there is a slight chance that baby might be mine. But y'know, that's no big deal!"

but seriously that was wow. Just wow.

keep it up ;)

Wow... I don't even know what to say. Like it's sad that Mike broke up with her, but yet I'm so happy she has Billie to take care of her regardless. This whole story feels so realistic, it's very detailed, looking forward to more chapters!

Oh snap, well that is definitely something I hadn't expected excellent writing! I am literally obsessed with this story and fangirl whenever I see there is a new update. :3 you must keep going! I've gotta know what happens O.O

Woo that's an awesome cliffhanger!

@ WhereMyDemonsHide
Yeah, and the chocolate incident is actually very important to the story. You'll see why in the next chapter :D Glad you like it!

Haha yeah don't you just hate silent readers? Lol, this was hilarious, the chocolate/fish fight, was brilliant haha. I could totally imagine Tré doing all of this :D great work! I am still laughing about this... Haha

That was a really cool chapter. Can't wair to see what happens next ^.^

@LKBJA @WhereMyDemonsHide
Thanks for reading guys!

Woo that was awesome!

Nice one ;)

I loved the last two chapters

@ LKBJA thanks :D update might be a little slow this week, but hopefully I will get it out by Sunday!

Poor Billie and poor Ollie. I pity both :( update soon. I <3 this story

Woo, excellent cliffhanger! It really makes you wonder which one is going to go after Jessie.
And yeah, typing on a phone is long, slow and tedious but it's how I write all my chapters. Can't wait to see another update for this one, it's super good