March 5th, 2014 at 01:49am
Germany - Lukas - Comments
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Wow, this is amazing! I love the words you chose, it paints a beautiful picture!March 5th, 2014 at 12:22am
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@ always forever;
Thank you so much! You just make my night :) Happy Valentine's Day!February 14th, 2014 at 05:12am -
this is beautiful! I'm glad I read this, it's so realistic. And I loved it, it felt pure and real. It felt like you wrote it from the heart and it was great :)February 14th, 2014 at 04:57am
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@ kim wonshik.
Gosh I am smiling so much right now, you have no clue!! This is actually a true story, I fell for this *german* exchange student on my ski team and there was some unspoken chemistry and in the behinng there was so much possibility and hope but I screwed everything up because I was too afraid to talk to him, and by the fireplace during awards is the last time I'll ever see him because he's on the JV team and their season is over. I regret everything but I did get a heartfelt one-shot out of it :)
God bless
XoxoFebruary 9th, 2014 at 04:48pm -
This was amazing! My god, you write magnificently. This piece was very deep and emotional to me. You are simply a genius with your descriptions, I mean, "His eyes were blue, not strikingly oceanic, nor airy like a summer sky." That was my favorite line. Or maybe not because I liked the whole thing. Your way with words is striking and very descriptive. I didn't have a problem imagining his gorgeous eyes or the smile on his face and I could feel her emotional despair while she was watching him and during their small moment. I love when you go into depth about how she saw him before and how even her body felt as her knees were burning. The way you end it is just so crushing and I'm left her sitting like, "WHY?!" Why wasn't there a hello?! It made me feel so alone.
Your writing is so great and this one-shot was a pleasure to read. Great job on this!
February 9th, 2014 at 12:45pm -
@ domi823
Oh my goodness you're making me smile so much right now :) My ELA teacher is always talking about how "only real authors have diction", so this means a ton to me ^_^ Your kind words really made me happy.
God bless
XoxoFebruary 8th, 2014 at 06:09pm -
Y u get my feels Rollin'? But seriously your diction is fabulous.February 8th, 2014 at 04:30am
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@ Bonessir
Thank you SO much, you have no clue how much that means to me right now. It made my night.
God bless
XoxoFebruary 8th, 2014 at 01:08am -
This is beautiful XFebruary 7th, 2014 at 11:09pm
Thank you so much! It was such a personal piece, so to be able to open up and write about it and have people accept my meaning and portrayal just makes me smile from ear to ear ^_^ Thank you!
God Bless
xoxo