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  • Moriarty;

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    Hi, I'm from the 'Prompt Me Away with A7X' Contest and I'm here to judge your entry!

    Jimmy and Johnny- what a pair! I love their dialogue during this, that they make the best out of being trapped in a grocery store rather than bitching at each other.

    I did love the story in this one- how it was all very cute and innocent (at least as cute and innocent as you can get with The Rev involved in a story!) and their becoming boyfriends was adorable right at the end. His trip to the grocery store wasn't wasted after all!

    I really loved what you did with this prompt- some fluffy stuff is just what I needed! Thank you so much for entering my contest :)
    February 28th, 2014 at 08:30pm
  • AJ9

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    I enjoyed this. It was cute Hug
    February 21st, 2014 at 12:29pm
  • Synyster Vengance

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    That was so cute I think I'm gonna vomit baby unicorns
    February 20th, 2014 at 08:27am
  • saegusa.

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    Cutest thing cutest thing cutest thing cutest thing.

    Oh my goodness gracious, this was so sweet and so cute and I love it. It's adorable and I love the interactions and I can't even pick my favorite part, I loved it so much, aw. <3
    February 12th, 2014 at 02:08am
  • Ihayley

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    this is so sweet I love it :D
    February 11th, 2014 at 09:18pm
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