you have amazing writing skills and this story is just oh my gosh!!! don't give up ever you have a true talent for this.. anywho I love this and hope you update soon:D
AHHHHHH AHHHHHH OLGNWSHUCXHJBEIWC ABOUT FUCKING TIMEE HE REALIZED ITOMGOGMEJDXSHDWQKISS KSISS KISS KISS. SERIOUSLY MY HEART MELTED AND STUFF. Btw this was not crap and you should stop thinking that because I strongly disagree.