American Soldier - Comments

fienix66613 (100)

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@Marrissa.Motionless
I really appreciate your opinion on this and thank you for recommending it

March 30th, 2014 at 11:12pm

Marissa.Motionless (100)

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I'm not particularly interested in any sort of military anything so while I wasn't personally captivated, it was moving and suspenseful. It wasn't too much of an Avenged Sevenfold story, they seemed to have more of a small part and the story followed Blaze much more. Speaking of Blaze I enjoyed how you develop her and make her unique; you make the struggles of war seem to unfold before the readers eyes. RECOMENDED :) great job

March 30th, 2014 at 08:25pm

Brokendreamer728 (100)

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Yet another good chapter keep up the good work.

March 12th, 2014 at 12:46pm

Brokendreamer728 (100)

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Awesome as always I'm going to comment every chapter since it seems I'm the only one who does.

March 11th, 2014 at 10:15pm

Brokendreamer728 (100)

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That's cool I'm sure it will be worth the wait

March 11th, 2014 at 07:26pm

fienix66613 (100)

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@Brokendreamer728

the guys appear in the 11th chapter. I'm sorry they don't come in until that late in the story but what's in Chapter 11 is a surprise.

March 11th, 2014 at 06:24pm

Brokendreamer728 (100)

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I love the story so far it's awesome. Keep up the good work. Are they going to meet the guys in the next chapter? I'm just asking if want to keep it a surprise that's cool with me.

March 11th, 2014 at 05:32am