The Never War - Comments

Just found this and read it all! I love it and hope you update soon!!

Dude,
Red Chief better watch out.
Harrow is a scary bitch when Holland is in trouble.
BoOM

The writing is really clear and the story is really interesting. I hope to see more soon~

“He saved my life.”

“How nice of him.”

I laughed so hard because the reaction is so underwhelming. x] I love your wit in this.

This is such a good story! I love anything with Peter Pan from Once Upon a Time and this story fits his personality well. Although he isn't as cocky/smug... Which is nice.
The 2 main girl characters are interesting, I love how they always look out for each other and. I especially love Harrow. (Unquiet name btw) I like Will, is he Peter's sidekick? I'm guessing this is Before Felix
And the summary was amazing. Before Peter Pan and Wendy...[/url] I freaking love it.
And layout is breathtaking as well. Amazing job on it.
Please keep writing this story because it is absolutely amazing!

peter you twat.
you know harrow is gonna be pissed that holland has a bruise.
dumbass.

PETER PAN IS MY FAVORITE STORY I DON'T EVEN KNOW WHAT TO DO WITH MYSELF RIGHT NOW OH MY LANTA THIS IS PERFECT AND I JUST CANNOT RIGHT NOW.
Sorry for all the yelling I'm just really reaaaaallllyyy excited :)

This looks so interesting I cannot wait

DUDE I CAN'T FUCKING WAIT I'M FUCKING STOKED I WANT TO START WRITING NOW BUT I CAN'T BECAUSE I'M SNEAKING THIS IN DURING PRACTICE OMGGGGGGG