White Walls - Comments

@ WhiskeyPrincess118
that's an interesting theory...I'll go as far as to say nobody is going to die in this story.

@ everdeen
omg. thank you so much for commenting so much, this made my day. (even though some of them repeated themselves multiple times). i really appreciate you and everyone else taking the time to comment and the fact that you went back and commented on the last few chapters is amazing so thank you xxx
in regards to what you said about chapter 7, well hey if anyone knows how to photoshop what they think the photos would have looked like, go ahead :P
the drama and the suspense of who exactly is ill may arise in chapters 8-9 or 9-10 so get ready!
xx

PS: you know who's probably ill? me. Sorry for my almost OCD behavior, I need to make everything organized.

PS: you know who's probably ill? me. Sorry for my almost OCD behavior, I need to make everything organized.

> Chapter 7 (Sweetheart)

I suspected John's lack of self love was the reason he didn't want to name his son after him. Although the tradition is super cool, Lucas is also a beautiful name and you can call him Luke #starwars

"What can I say, like father like son." why that worries me?

It's good to write about 8123 and wonder how the future will be, I believe they will expand as a clothing brand more than a music production, their designs are truly amazing.

Dirk's jokes about the photos make me want to really see them. Knowing his skills for almost nude photoshoots it would have looked insane.

I agree with WhiskeyPrincess theory about Jac or Eric. Or Garrett. I won't even mention the adorable sometimes naughty "L" baby.

SHE CALLS ME SWEEEEEEEEEEEEEETHEAAAAAAAAAAAAART

AAAAAAAAAAAAWN, more family cuteness. Their family time scenes, http://bleubirdblog.com/ and #arrowthebearclub make me revisit the idea of being a mother one day, i can handle the tantrums, just give me chubby bellies to hold <3

I swear they are having more sex in 7 chapters than they had in the whole DGUOM time.

> Chapter 6 (Happier Times)

The flashback...
Their family time...
“Daddy I’m s-sorry, I love you lots.”
http://media.tumblr.com/a83104c4d0b26488782480e8aacf22f6/tumblr_inline_mhpsptVCIc1qz4rgp.gif

"I think we’d done enough suffering for once lifetime as it was." << THIS. Make the others suffer, not them!

Leighton laughs at Jenny now, but she's probably going to have the same worries with Lucas.

Another flashback to challenge my emotions. To thank you or not thank you, that's the question.

"But hey, everything goes in cycles."
Oh the "I'll give you hints to make you worried sooner about what's going to happen" same old you...

> Chapter 6 (Happier Times)

The flashback...
Their family time...
“Daddy I’m s-sorry, I love you lots.”
http://media.tumblr.com/a83104c4d0b26488782480e8aacf22f6/tumblr_inline_mhpsptVCIc1qz4rgp.gif

"I think we’d done enough suffering for once lifetime as it was." << THIS. Make the others suffer, not them!

Leighton laughs at Jenny now, but she's probably going to have the same worries with Lucas.

Another flashback to challenge my emotions. To thank you or not thank you, that's the question.

"But hey, everything goes in cycles."
Oh the "I'll give you hints to make you worried sooner about what's going to happen" same old you...

> Chapter 5 (Working Class)

Thankfully Tate and Pat will be friends again. This situation seemed more lost than John's depression state.

Garrett is being a bitch.

Loving Jared (John's personal yoda) reminds me that I miss Parker.

"Am I a bad mother, John?" OH NO DON'T CRY!! Toddlers switch from angels to little demons in a matter of hours, that's what I call mood swings.

Tim and Lei's interaction is incredibly well written and convincing, did I ever mention that?

Nobody said it was easy, but John is doing well with his disease and Lei should be canonised, this woman is a saint for everything she has been through.

> Chapter 4 (Intimacy)

I admire the way John handled "the argument", I mean, years ago he would have just screamed, hurt her somehow and go away. The fact he listened to what she said and agreed to change is... wow, I'm proud, rehab made a huge difference.

> Chapter 4 (Intimacy)

I admire the way John handled "the argument", I mean, years ago he would have just screamed, hurt her somehow and go away. The fact he listened to what she said and agreed to change is... wow, I'm proud, rehab made a huge difference.

> Chapter 4 (Intimacy)

I admire the way John handled "the argument", I mean, years ago he would have just screamed, hurt her somehow and go away. The fact he listened to what she said and agreed to change is... wow, I'm proud, rehab made a huge difference.

> Chapter 4 (Intimacy)

I admire the way John handled "the argument", I mean, years ago he would have just screamed, hurt her somehow and go away. The fact he listened to what she said and agreed to change is... wow, I'm proud, rehab made a huge difference.

> Chapter 3 (Balance)

This title was perfect. Isn't everything in life a matter of balance? Besides, this connection between mother and son/daughter is something so amazing, isn't it? In the aspect of evolution it's what basically make babies survive, having a protective loving grown up around them. Biologicaly, it's surreal the miracle of life! I'm studying embriology right now (embrace myself, tests are coming) and it's all incredible, good job God/universe/whatever is responsible for our creation.

I agree it's not the time for another baby (but I bet they will have one more unintentionally)

“You should let Mr. and Mrs. Custody Battle know about this.” John, you are spending too much time with Ms. Acid Humor.

The men's talk made me laugh, when men get a little drunk I swear they gossip like teenage girls and are twice as funny.

What Austin said it's sad, but true. However, having a child is waaaay more commitment than marriage. So, I still believe Johnny boy is being a p*ssy for not proposing.

THE FLASHBACK HIT ME RIGHT IN THE FEELINGS.
"If it made her happy then I’d learn to be." dude... this is a quote that put love into words. The way the revelation went wasn't usual, but couldn't be more perfect.

> Chapter 3 (Balance)

This title was perfect. Isn't everything in life a matter of balance? Besides, this connection between mother and son/daughter is something so amazing, isn't it? In the aspect of evolution it's what basically make babies survive, having a protective loving grown up around them. Biologicaly, it's surreal the miracle of life! I'm studying embriology right now (embrace myself, tests are coming) and it's all incredible, good job God/universe/whatever is responsible for our creation.

I agree it's not the time for another baby (but I bet they will have one more unintentionally)

“You should let Mr. and Mrs. Custody Battle know about this.” John, you are spending too much time with Ms. Acid Humor.

The men's talk made me laugh, when men get a little drunk I swear they gossip like teenage girls and are twice as funny.

What Austin said it's sad, but true. However, having a child is waaaay more commitment than marriage. So, I still believe Johnny boy is being a p*ssy for not proposing.

THE FLASHBACK HIT ME RIGHT IN THE FEELINGS.
"If it made her happy then I’d learn to be." dude... this is a quote that put love into words. The way the revelation went wasn't usual, but couldn't be more perfect.

I'm such a terrible reader. I apologize deeply for my lack of comments, I won't blame me being busy all the time *silent cry* it's just that... you know when you like something so much it leaves you speechless? Seriously, I'm not lying, I always have so much in my mind to say, but it's hard to put it into words. Better late than never, so here comes my thoughts.

Well now we know why Lucas isn't named John. But it's so sad to see that John doesn't want his name to be a burden. :(
I like reading about all the stuff going on with 8123. I know it's just a story, but sometimes you wonder if things like that go on there. haha.
Its crazy to think though that John and Leighton will be grandparents one day. It's one thing to have a kid or start thinking bout kids but then you realize, wow they will have kids one day too.
The end was cute. I think if I ever have kids, I would be like that. :D

As for the illness, well I'm liking WhiskeyPrincess theory about Jac or Eric. Could be one of the reasons they want to get married so fast. So maybe one of them, or someone in the band. Can't wait to see what you come up with.

@ IndigoGirl8123 Canon is like when your OTP actually ends up together, Idk where the term came from... also oh dear OH DEAR NOW I'M GETTING NERVOUS

@ useyourtelescope
Okay first of all WHAT IS CANON SOMEONE EXPLAIN TO ME THIS THING
ALSO, Jac and Eric's wedding won't be for a long time, but it is a party event so be weary

For the sickness theories, I think it's either Lucas or Garrett. Lucas because he seems especially terrible for the terrible two's, and in small children anxiety manifests in different ways. Garrett because he seems to be particularly miserable, and we don't really have a lot of backstory or know why. But if it's Jac or Eric (as the person before me commented), I'm actually royally gonna freak the fuck out.

Oh my god, what if the drama is at Jac and Eric's wedding?? Shit, this is terrible but I'm really itching to know what this drama is! Also god dammit John marry Lei already, I NEED MY OTP TO FINALLY BE CANON (or more canon than they already are).

Jac or Eric is sick...that's why they want to get married so quickly....
I will be very mad if you kill either of them off! Eric especially, I have a soft spot for the boy<3
Ugh. Can't wait for more though! x