On Fire - Comments

I really liked the descriptions you used for autumn, and for everything else. There was just a nice flow to this drabble, and it's enjoyable to read. Nice work

I love this drabble so much that I'm going to feature it in my drabble column in the Mibba Magazine

I actually love this so far! The description in chapter 1 is just epic and thoroughly detailed! Your way of writing is intriguing and interesting to read and I really can't wait for chapter 2 :) Amazing! I also like the fiery picture you paint of Autumn too! It is really effective and a great piece to read so far xxxxxxx