Just for a Moment: Truths - Comments

Oh my god what's happening! Don't leave me hanging! Love it!

I really love the story update when you get a chance please i cant wait for more

Please update when you get a chance. Can't wait to see where this goes!!

This is so well written and it actually comes together plausibly, unlike other stories that make no sense. Thank you for sharing your talents!! Update soon please!! :D

Oh gosh!!! cant wait to see how that goes!!

OHHHHH a mystery!! Love it!

This has good potential but the spelling and grammar need work, also, the dialogue sounds really robotic and awkward, not sure if it's on purpose but I think it needs some looking at, just my thoughts though, otherwise loved what you have so far.

This is soooo beautifully written!!!

This is absolutely fricking amazing. Kinda hoping its not going to end up with Kellin and her together cause I think that would ruin it, but yeah this is heart breakingly perfect I am in bloody love

Love the update!

Aw i hope she doesn't embarrass herself in front of Kellin

I think this is going to be interesting! A few typos, nothing too big. Keep it up!