Room With No Windows - Comments

@ everdeen
I agree completely. Like you SO love her. Haha
And i work fast. Another update later tonight!

"I didn't want to let her down...so I let her go"

Wow, deep. Actually, I share your theory. I think T4W is "a lie", like, it's obviously he cares about the girl ("i don't want to hurt you anymore"), so maybe he does love her, but not enough to keep trying to make things work or enough to let her go. It's a complex song.

Yey! My line! It really fit perfect.

RUBY ❤️

John is breaking free and letting his pervert side show up. Their teasing makes me laugh.

PS: 2 updates?!?! Is it christmas already?

@ everdeen
I LOVE YOU FOR QUOTING MY FAVORITE BOOK. BLESS YOUR SOUL.

THEY KISSED!!!! Elsa is so reckless (in a good way, like a child). I think she was engaged to that bastard because "we accept the love we think we deserve".

I think the ex-fiance will look out for her in John's house. Plus, she really has to say the truth to her family because she has to go back to college at some point. At last, I predict they will meet "her" somewhere or know about her somehow and John will get nervous blan blah blah but all I'm telling is drama, right? Before that definitely a making out season wouldn't hurt (God, it would be so funny if Halvo showed up and did some joke like "i want a friend like that too" hahaha)

Ok, time to shut up, I got excited imagining future. Sorry about any gramar mistake.

This is amazing :)

@ LoverOfLove
Glad you like it! There will be plenty happening next :D

I love this story so much!!! I get so excited when I see it's been updated!!! Can't wait to see what happens with John and Ellie next!

Wait a minute while I grab a knife to cut this cloud of sexual tension.

Yes, John, keep that bastard away from our loving Elsa!

Halvo is always welcome. I adore him, so funny.

@ Jinxling
Haha thank you!

@ everdeen
Ding ding ding! I hope you also caught my mention of the coffee shop ;)

John acts like a teenager sometimes hahaha poor him, not his fault. Both of them have some history going on, I bet Elsa's boyfriend wasn't nice, maybe he did something bad to her. Plus, John and "her" reminds me of The Maine's song "Visions".

Uhh so good, more please!

@ everdeen
Mushroom soup is the greatest soup next to chicken noodle. Just sayin.
I have to confess, that's where I got the name from. And I do the exact same thing.
And there is most definitely a "her!"

First of all, mushroom soup is heaven, Elsa has great taste (Onion soup is really good too, sorry, I get excited talking about food).

Oh... There's a "her". Interesting.

"The floor wasn't the only thing that was hard"

HAHAHAHAH OMG I'm laughing out loud seriously, my face is hurting, really good pun.

PS: I have to confess that everytime i read "Elsa" i want to sing "let it goooo let it gooo" because of Frozen.

@ everdeen @ m-attie Haha your guys' comments really are the best. I was hoping to write another chapter today though I might not cuz it's kind of been an off day. But your comments are making feel a lot better ;)

I'm starting to think John will find excuses for her not to leave when the time come. Swaying my heart with compliments on my country, awn. John, John, thinking with the other head already, men...

I'm starting to think John will find excuses for her not to leave when the time come. Swaying my heart with compliments on my country, awn. John, John, thinking with the other head already, men...

"..like how she would look in ONLY one of my shirts." - of course, John, of course.
They're cute, like really, really cute. And yes, John, I also think you could get used to having her around!

Elsa won my heart.

Liking this so far and can't wait to see where you take it!