My Darling Girl - Comments

i must say i completely devoured this part, great job abs-and-pecks-atootly fun! possessive and then her shy yet loving it great flip. can't wait for the drama with benny dearest.XD

It's rare that I say possessiveness is cute, but it totally is here. I'm glad he's alive, however, I wish Ben would get a fucking grip as I might strongly dislike him as of now. Please update again soon! (:

I only finished the other chapter earlier today so thanks for updating again so soon :)

Thank god Tom is alive though, I didn't think you would kill him off but sometimes you never know with stories. I just keep thinking Ben doesn't get the hint that Elle isn't interested in him in the way he is. At least that's what I get from reading this story.

Can't wait for another update!

And there's the start of the drama...

I think it's good that Tom is possessive though, it shows how much he cares for Elle. This story is just so good, I just want to see how the next chapter goes.

@ Vampyris
No need to apologise, it's that awesome!

@ jwilliams2
Fixed! With a whole new layout! Please let me know if anything is wrong and I will fix it. Thank you so much!

@ jwilliams2
I'm sorry! I will fix it immediately! It's not showing anything blank for me on my mac. but Ill change the background! sorry sorry sorry!

what is wrong with your story? it is just coming up blank under the picture.

Loved it! So sad though, and I hope that they're okay.

@ punkrockandhockey
Aww thanks! I'm sorry for making people cry lol

I definitely had some tears during this chapter. I think it just proves how well you're writing both the story and Elle's character. You're doing a fantastic job :)

@ apples.fiona.
Oh good! I'm- happy I made you cry?? lol XD thats weird huh... anyway! thank you so much :)

This has officially become one of my favourites! And you did make me tear up quite a bit with this last chapter. Please update soon!

@ timeisup
Well! That's a lot of pressure! I will try to keep it up :) thank you

Wow. Definitely my favourite story on Mibba right now. Please please please update soon!

@ punkrockandhockey
Wow! Thanks! I'll try to keep It up!

Another chapter and I didn't read the previous one that long ago...

You do such a great job with this story that I just want more! I don't want anything bad to happen but I can sense there will be some drama at some point in this story.

This is my favourite Tom Hiddleston story that I've read :)

Wow. The updates just keep getting better :)

@ RosiePosie08
Haha that much? :)

Love this so much.