August 27th, 2014 at 12:46pm
I love Drew and E3, but mostly Drew.
But now I love you for writing this.
:3
The Booty - Comments
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May 29th, 2014 at 09:46am
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JESUS. CHRIST.
ALEX.
How did I not know you write E3?!
This was brilliant. I need MORE.
On a completely (somewhat) unrelated note, this made me think of this..
May 28th, 2014 at 05:34am -
Damn this is cute. I love his inner monologue and how, despite his best efforts, he can't be calm and collected with this girl.
Fantastic!
March 30th, 2014 at 10:21pm -
HAHAH SO CUTE and I don't even really know Drew Chadwick March 29th, 2014 at 05:02pm
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This made me laugh and I'm laughing as I type this because my heart cannot handle this.
I like how he was concerned about so many things like how he totally wasn't smooth when he approached her,
if she was underage, and then just. . .the booty. Always have to know the name of who the booty belongs to, yeah?
I also noted that this is pretty much my thought process too since I'm a ~*~legal adult~*~ and sometimes people
look older than they are when they're actually younger. Lessons in trying not to be a creeper. Lovely.
I like how his thought process is though; you've got the third person POV down!
Definitely taking
notes on how to improve my usage of it. I can imagine this whole fic happening IRL and it is glorious.
Anyway, I am going to sit over here and re-read this as I wait for my nail polish to dry. Because this has made my night.March 29th, 2014 at 02:47pm -
FINALLY AN E3 FIC. I'm excited already.February 24th, 2014 at 06:13pm
Firstly, I'm going to apologise because I have no idea why E3 are and not clue who the guy in the banner is. He's fit though.
I pretty much laughed the whole way through this because I totally have friends that act like this around girls. Drew's change from rational thought process to having his entire thought process consumed by the booty is just...aw man, it's spot-on. Absolutely spot-on. I have honestly met dozens of men that act in the exact same way and I think that's what made me giggle the most out of it all, the realism behind how amusing it it.
Drew doesn’t know if he has a natural connection with booty girl, though. He just likes her butt. - I may or may not have snorted out loud when I read this line. Absolute gold.
I don't think I can fault anything about this. You chose a difficult tense to write in as well, which you've pulled off fantastically. Amusing, kind of cute and altogether a well-written piece. Awesome job!