I Need Your Love Like a Boy Needs His Mother's Side - Comments

Hi! I'm from the 'Prompt Me Away with A7X' Contest and I'm here to judge your story.

This was definitely one of the interesting entries- you took my prompt and completley turned it upside down, which is kudos for you because I love people that do that.

You've got elements of every single thing that could possibly happen in a story right here- murder, sex, pregnancy, death, moving on from something difficult- all rolled into one! Sometimes it's hard to get into those with little detail, but you've done a great job conveying all of the right emotions here. Adding a kid in there- way to tug on my feelings!

I really enjoyed this story- thank you so much for entering my contest!

@ AJ9
I'm glad you liked it, and your welcome for clearing up the confusion :) i may or may not write a different version of this.

@ Foxie
Oh, right. Thanks for clearing up my confusion. Great plot. Really enjoyed it.

@ AJ9
Thank you :) and it was some random kid in the school that shot him.

I like this. It was different than other stories. It was sad that Zacky died. I was a bit confused about who shot him, but it was good nonetheless.