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  • Crayola

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    masnbdcvkyjverhv fwlet
    NO!
    i need more more more more more
    nowwwwwwww
    next chapter please! im hooked and most definitely on the edge of my seat
    its so good
    write more walleaaaaa
    xxx
    June 7th, 2008 at 05:03am
  • Crayola

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    oh god damnit
    SUSPENSE is killing me!
    hahahaha
    xx
    June 6th, 2008 at 03:23pm
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    aw i smiled so big at the end
    actually
    at the whole bit
    its so amazinggggggg
    best The Used based story ever so far
    xx
    June 6th, 2008 at 03:21pm
  • Crayola

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    i think this chapter is especially good so far
    because its sort of leading into a love story it makes you think
    but then you just knowwwww its going to be complicated, maybe because of this jack person?
    i dont know
    im probably wrong
    anyways
    loving it so far :)
    xx
    June 6th, 2008 at 03:18pm
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    lksjbfvoeqyutbhf qetb8g its so so so so good :)
    im going to keep reading. im hooked!
    scarlett's such a great name
    xx
    June 6th, 2008 at 03:14pm
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    aww walleaaa
    this is so good.
    i love how its so descriptive, it means when i read it i can practically see/feel/smell it, as my own interpretation
    next chapterrrr!
    xxx
    June 6th, 2008 at 03:07pm
  • Lunacy.Fringe.

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    LOL is that the end? Chapter 12? Or is there gonna be more?

    Either way, That was fantastic!
    May 30th, 2008 at 09:21pm
  • Jezz-x

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    Moar** XD
    May 30th, 2008 at 10:35am
  • Jezz-x

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    I think this is the box to reply.. If not.. I phail at life ^_^

    Well, i must say this is really good, you have to write some maor so i can read it at school :)

    I la chu Wallea Moss. <333
    May 30th, 2008 at 10:34am
  • mystical_flutterby

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    ooohhhh, that was twisted

    and there is a sequeal!!!

    going there now!!! <333
    May 29th, 2008 at 10:17am
  • Lunacy.Fringe.

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    I read the first 3 chapters, but the small print is starting to make my eyes hurt, so I'll start again some other time.
    It's awesome so far!
    May 29th, 2008 at 01:26am
  • Lunacy.Fringe.

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    Could you make the font a little bigger, please?
    Other than that, it's good.
    I've only read the 1st chapter, but I'll read the rest as soon as I get the time.
    May 29th, 2008 at 12:43am
  • breakingdawn

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    And the plot thickens MUAHAHAAHAH
    May 27th, 2008 at 10:06am
  • kellehKILLAH

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    >:O theyre not reall?!

    -screams-

    xD <33
    May 27th, 2008 at 09:58am
  • Emma Unnie

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    OMG!!!
    NOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!
    It can't be a dream!!
    The sexiness of Scarlet and Freya can't be figments of Jepha's imagination.
    I NEED MORE!!!
    That was amazing...you're amazing!!

    Omg I love you sooooooooooo much babez!! :arms:
    May 26th, 2008 at 12:20pm
  • blooming.

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    =O
    does that mean it was all a dream?
    holy shitttttt.
    and the plot thickens....
    AHA, always wanted to say that.
    I love this story miss, its so awesome.
    ily.
    May 26th, 2008 at 12:09pm
  • kellehKILLAH

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    this story IS the shit.
    mine sucks homsexual ass (Y)

    LOL xx
    May 23rd, 2008 at 09:52am
  • mystical_flutterby

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    that was awesome luv...vampires!?! yay...i <3 vampires
    <3<3<3
    May 23rd, 2008 at 07:58am
  • blooming.

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    that was unexpected.
    but goooood.
    this story is uber awesomee.
    :) you're amazingggg.
    ily.
    May 22nd, 2008 at 01:35pm
  • Emma Unnie

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    :omfg:
    Does that mean...no he can't be a vampire!!
    OMFG!!!!!
    Oh now I really can't wait for more.
    You're an amazing writer my darling. Clap
    Hail I bow down to your talent!!!

    :arms:
    I love you my gorgeous best friend!!! :cute:
    May 22nd, 2008 at 09:56am