masnbdcvkyjverhv fwlet NO! i need more more more more more nowwwwwwww next chapter please! im hooked and most definitely on the edge of my seat its so good write more walleaaaaa xxx
i think this chapter is especially good so far because its sort of leading into a love story it makes you think but then you just knowwwww its going to be complicated, maybe because of this jack person? i dont know im probably wrong anyways loving it so far :) xx
aww walleaaa this is so good. i love how its so descriptive, it means when i read it i can practically see/feel/smell it, as my own interpretation next chapterrrr! xxx
Could you make the font a little bigger, please? Other than that, it's good. I've only read the 1st chapter, but I'll read the rest as soon as I get the time.
OMG!!! NOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!! It can't be a dream!! The sexiness of Scarlet and Freya can't be figments of Jepha's imagination. I NEED MORE!!! That was amazing...you're amazing!!
=O does that mean it was all a dream? holy shitttttt. and the plot thickens.... AHA, always wanted to say that. I love this story miss, its so awesome. ily.
:omfg: Does that mean...no he can't be a vampire!! OMFG!!!!! Oh now I really can't wait for more. You're an amazing writer my darling. I bow down to your talent!!!
:arms: I love you my gorgeous best friend!!! :cute:
NO!
i need more more more more more
nowwwwwwww
next chapter please! im hooked and most definitely on the edge of my seat
its so good
write more walleaaaaa
xxx