THIS WAS SO GOOD AND THEN IT WAS SO SAD AND THEN IT WAS SO GOOD.
I couldn't stop my range of emotions as Austin and Alan went from being adorable to being interrupted to being shut down to being heartbroken to being reunited and repaired. It was adorable and oh-so-sweet when I got to the reunion, but the beginning with Alan's sperm donat-father-made me so angry and got me shaking. I hated him with a passion. But everything from Rite-Aid forward was so sweet and cute and I loved it.
You did an absolutely amazing job, especially for your first time writing in 3rd!