March 21st, 2014 at 10:54pm
Trying to Be #1 - Comments
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it's an amazing storrrrrrrryyyy!!!!!!!!!!:D:D:DMarch 17th, 2014 at 11:45pm
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it's an amazing storrrrrrrryyyy!!!!!!!!!!:D:D:DMarch 17th, 2014 at 11:45pm
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updateMarch 10th, 2014 at 05:20am
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@ sking2
Lmao at break his qb hands. Naima is quite prideful, so I don't think that she's going to come out and tell him.March 9th, 2014 at 01:50am -
How awful for Naima. Good thing she had good neighbors. Kinda can't wait for Colin to beat this Darius fool, just don't let him break his qb hands. ;)March 8th, 2014 at 03:23am
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great sense of humorMarch 3rd, 2014 at 07:59am
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i definitely agree with sking2March 3rd, 2014 at 07:53am
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@ sking2
Most definitely! I thought it was time for some suspense.March 1st, 2014 at 08:31am -
Oh crap, I hope Naima is okay. I like the way this story is going, keep up the good work.March 1st, 2014 at 06:42am
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@ chemsworth
Thank you for the insight. I'm just kinda freeballing as I go and its kinda hard so I want people to call me out if something isnt sitting right.March 1st, 2014 at 12:41am -
i love it. and i like how naima doesn't just give in right away y'know. like other stories the girl just sees him and its "instant love" but this one is differentFebruary 28th, 2014 at 11:35pm
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@ sking2
Thanks for letting me what you think about it. I really dont want to be flying blind.February 27th, 2014 at 03:08pm -
Good update. You had me fooled on the blind date thinking it could be Colin. Happy they met up at the end and started to break the ice. Keep up the good work.February 27th, 2014 at 03:03pm
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Hope you update soon. I'm really liking this story.
February 26th, 2014 at 06:09am -
I like this story. I like how feisty Naima. Please update.February 26th, 2014 at 02:40am
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February 22nd, 2014 at 04:10pm
Thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying it!