The Babysitter - Comments

UPDATE! UPDATE!

I can't tell you how much I wish you had ended this/written a sequel. If there is any chance for it to happen, please do!!!!

I really, honestly, and truly miss this story.

updat update update pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

i love this story, update soonnnnn.

Can't wait till next update! :D

Aww, that was sad =[

Loved it though and can't wait for more!!

aww thats so sad
your writing is amazing
update soon please
xx

This story is reeaalllyyy good. I love it. Amazing.
*subscribes*
More soon, please?
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You can read the complete story here, http: //celeb. adultfanfiction. net/story. php? no=544196034 just remove the spaces, and also what has been written of the sequel if you click on the author's name. This story was originally completed on 12/27/05.

A DREAM???? Are you kidding me? :-(
I wish it wasnt a drem.
I really like this story.
And im glad there is a sequel!!!!! *dancing around* :-D
But dont wait that long to update again...

oh my goodness.

When can I expect another update? XD

This story is so good.

The chapters always leave me hanging.

AND I KNEW IT WAS A DREAM! ...At first, then I thought it was real, then I was happy it was a dream because there still gives me hope they'll be together.

Did that even make sense?

Grr I thought they got back together!

More soon!!

It was so sad..
Please dont wait so long with the next cheapter again ..

Man that one was sad
poor Ava!

Billie had better come around.
And Cara needs to seriously just go away. I don't like her.
But that was a good update!

I loved it!
Cara is a bitch. I don't know why Ava still considers her as a friend...

Amazing amazing amazing.

I don't like Cara...but I don't think I'm meant to.

I do like tom the father though, he's super supportive.

...Aaaaaaaand I wanna know what going on.

:D lovely update, super-star-fantastic, haha.

ohmygod!

Noooo! Are they going to split?

Arrgh! Can't wait for the next update =D

Gosh....drama!!! I hope they will be together again...Update soon, plz.