aawe dudes!! matt you stupid why oh why did you ask that dumb question? talk about messing things up! the two needs to just sit down and talk like two grown ass men
I agree you should post both endings, but personally I think they deserve their happy ending as they've been through enough trauma. Please update soon xx
I just want to shake some sense into these two. As for the ending, you could do it like a choose your own adventure thing and post both endings, letting readers choose which they want to read.
No, but, for real? I am impressed on how this story can just only get better. And the things I feel when I read it... And by that, I meant that I want to cry every time that Brian leaves. I wanna cry for both of them. I wanna cry for Brian having this sort of life, having almost zero money, having to sell himself. It completely broke me when they first had sex, the way Brian felt cared for. It made me feel so bad. And sometimes I get so pissed at Matt. Why don't you lock Brian up in your house?! Damn it, Matthew! I know he's too proud, he being Brian, but, fuck, if I was Matthew I would never, EVER, let him go every morning. I would never. He just has to take an attitude now. Like, right fucking now. How can a person live like that? Both of them, oh my God!
This story, really, it just hits my feelings. And I swear to God I'll hunt you down if you ever end it on a bad way.
@ rachthebat. Oh my- thank you! I love it so much, really. Actually, I came across your stories today, just now. I read Under My Skin and instantly fell in love, then I came to this sequel and fell in love even harder. I love Brian in this story and it's funny, because usually Brian as a prostitute annoys me. This one... oh, this one... there's nothing that I want more than to see Brian finally let Matthew hold him the way that he deserves. He deserves to be loved, right? :C I'll be waiting!