The Art of Breaking - Comments

@ Ca20000
I'll update it tomorrow

@ NikkiFoxy8
Thank you and you're welcome!

Loved this so much and thought the ending was good, loved it so much and well done writing it I can't wait until thou shall not die is updated xxx

Okay, I posted the last comment before I read the final chapter! This is the new comment after I read the final chapter! That final chapter was perfect! Now Natalie and Gena both got their revenge and they are torturing the other guys! I really loved the ending! That was an awesome twist! You are always an amazing writer and please keep being forever awesome! Thank you!

That was awesome! She finally got revenge for herself and everyone he tortured! I really want Natalie, Connor, and Gena to survive and escape the other guys! They should all be famous for being the only survivors of The Doctors! She could take Connor, go to the police, tell them everything and go home to her mother! Please let them have a very happy ending! Update soon!

woah....amazing

Wow that was unexpected but loved it and I wonder if this is the end please update again if there is another chapter and also when are you going to update thou shall not die xxxx

I forgot to ask, what is going to happen to Gena? Will she and her baby be okay? I'm sorry, i'm just really excited! Update soon!

YES! YES! YES! Natalie finally fought back and won! I really hope she gets out of there with Connor and escapes the other guys! Will she take care of Connor by herself and get to the police in time? She may be their only survivor! I really hope she gets back home to her mother and takes Connor with her! Update soon!

Amazing. Seriously can't wait for next chapter. Please update again soon.

YAY LOVE IT AD BADASS NATALIE can't wait for another update please update soon xxxxx

Holy shit!

That was totally fuckin epic!!!! I did not see that coming. Awesome chapter, can't wait for the next one

Oh my god!

Ohhhh shit

Holy fuckin shit! I'm so scared for Natalie and Connor! Can't wait for the next chapter.

I LOVE THIS SO MUCH would love to read the next chapter now, I wonder what her surgery is going to be xxxx

I get the feeling that Matt is going to give Natalie a lobotomy

Please don't let him kill Natalie! What she should do is convince Matt she is really sorry and promise to marry him and be a good wife and mother. She could use this to buy herself more time so she can take Connor and escape from Matt! Please update soon!

No!!! Michelle!!!