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  • EmptyInside

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    Poor girl
    April 28th, 2014 at 02:06am
  • Greenwolf7

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    Yay so glad you took my idea for a chapter, please update again I so want to know what happens, do you think you could do it tonight if your not tired or anything but cat wait to read it xxxxx
    April 28th, 2014 at 12:11am
  • NikkiFoxy8

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    I feel so bad for Michelle! What is going to happen during the dinner? I really hope Natalie gets herself and Connor away from Matt! Will Matt tell Natalie to marry him? Please update soon!
    April 27th, 2014 at 10:22pm
  • HerNameIsAlice

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    Creeper alert!
    April 27th, 2014 at 09:14pm
  • KaylahJ KAM

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    Oh my fuckin gosh! This is gonna he so intense. I can't wait for the next chapter.
    April 27th, 2014 at 08:58pm
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    Whaa?!!
    April 27th, 2014 at 01:06am
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    @ NikkiFoxy8
    I will
    April 27th, 2014 at 12:04am
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    @ Ca20000
    I might do that
    April 27th, 2014 at 12:03am
  • weirdogirl1236

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    @ NathanSykes' Swag
    I'll try to put it up tonight
    April 27th, 2014 at 12:02am
  • Greenwolf7

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    I love this so much, had no idea Conner was his real son, thats cool. Please, please, please update soon, i love this story and i think there should be a chapter where they go to brian's and she finds michelle update soon xxxxxx
    April 26th, 2014 at 10:58pm
  • NikkiFoxy8

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    Connor is his real son! That just blew me away like wow!!! Doesn't he care that he killed the mother of his child?! I think it would be cool if Matt might get the idea to make Natalie marry him and have their own child! I really loved this chapter! Please update soon!
    April 26th, 2014 at 10:26pm
  • KaylahJ KAM

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    Holy shit what?!? I did not see that coming!!! I wonder if Matt is ever goin to tell Natalie about killing Val and her lover. Awesome chapter, I can't wait for the next one Mr. Green
    April 26th, 2014 at 10:12pm
  • NikkiFoxy8

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    Brian is crazy for making Michelle go through that! I am loving this more and more! Please update soon!
    April 21st, 2014 at 05:19am
  • Greenwolf7

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    Wow never knew Brian could be really weird and that he did that, love the update though please update soon xxxx
    April 21st, 2014 at 03:56am
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    Bri's a weirdo...
    April 21st, 2014 at 12:06am
  • NikkiFoxy8

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    I really want to know how Matt killed Valary and Ryan! And what happened to Michelle? How did the other guys start surgeries? I'm sorry about all the questions, I am just so excited! I really love this story! Please update soon!
    April 16th, 2014 at 05:25pm
  • HerNameIsAlice

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    OHHHH!!!! Oh my god, I'm scared!
    April 15th, 2014 at 09:43pm
  • NikkiFoxy8

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    Will she find out more about Matt and the guys and confront him about it in the next chapter? I am so in love with this story! Please update soon!
    April 15th, 2014 at 09:10pm
  • Greenwolf7

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    OMG WHAT'S GOING TO HAPPEN. please update again i really want to know what happens now. and can't believe matt lied and all that stuff he did. update soon please xxxx
    April 15th, 2014 at 08:22pm
  • NikkiFoxy8

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    Please update soon!
    April 11th, 2014 at 12:30am