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  • BeautyNTheBreakkdown

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    Man okay so to be honest I COMPLETELY forgot that I had a Mibba account -- but Pictures on Silence and If Only Until Morning made such an impact on me that present day, freaking 10+ yrs after I originally read it, I was like... I want to find this story again. Where a lot of fanfics had generic leads and fit a lot of stereotypes, yours didn't. You have such a unique writing style, and I love how strong of a character you made Angie. I just went back through and read both stories again and it was all the best kinds of nostalgia.

    I really wanted to reach out and say a few things.

    1. Thank you for writing both of these stories. They're really well fleshed out and you feel like you're in them. I appreciate all the effort you took to write hundreds of pages worth of these stories!

    2. Could really empathize with Angie's feelings of loneliness that laced through the narrative, especially since I've also struggled with depression in the past and had that wrestling of like "no, I just want to fix it myself, I don't need help" and yeah it was just really real. I think sometimes, it can be easy to write off emotions and invalidate them internally, but I appreciated the intentional moments when you had Angie realize she needed to confront situations and mentalities, that she couldn't keep running away. For this girl with repressive tendencies, those were very important moments.

    3. Appreciated all the Palahniuk and assorted literary references. That actually really encouraged me to get back into reading more (and consequently creative writing as well!)

    4. This is just a cute damn story. It has its ups and downs (drama vs. chill, not like well written vs. poorly written), there's weight to it, but at the end of the day it just really makes me smile and appreciate the old Panic fandom days. I don't know, man. I used to read and write a good bit of fanfiction back in the Quizilla days but this one was always my favorite, and it holds up even now when I'm in my late 20's and married and all that good stuff.

    5. Last, and most importantly, I hope that you're still writing in some shape or form. You're very gifted. If you are, I'd love to read it!

    Appreciate you.

    (Please don't mind the username... middle school was a very cringy time lol)
    November 6th, 2021 at 02:07am
  • XxdeadharlequinxX

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    I love Beth. She my favoritest story person, EVER. haha.
    May 22nd, 2009 at 05:35am
  • Batman Away!

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    Yay for C! Your fantesticalness brings tears to my eyes. Cry <--Me. With tears. In my eyes.
    November 16th, 2008 at 12:17am
  • geaniexodd

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    i giggle whenever you mention matt.
    cause i have a friend name Matt Laurie.
    and he's just like Matt...'cept he's gay.

    really excelent story.
    October 14th, 2008 at 12:04am
  • pretty monsters

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    Although I am sad to see this story go, the epilogue finished it off quite nicely.
    Keep writing, you're extremely good at it.
    =]
    July 13th, 2008 at 03:58am
  • devil-with-the-horns

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    I LUV IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    July 10th, 2008 at 06:40pm
  • Nicole!

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    It can't be over
    X________x
    It was a cute ending though,
    i love the story all in all,
    it's original and exiting
    July 9th, 2008 at 09:27am
  • fweefy

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    Very nearly a perfect finish. Actually, let me expand on that. It was close to perfect from the start up until the very end. Haha, and I must say, the epilogue was a nice touch.
    Thanks for a great read. (:
    July 9th, 2008 at 06:13am
  • revenge_is_mine

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    awww, that was such a cute ending
    July 9th, 2008 at 05:23am
  • NoValentines

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    Wonderful ending, my dear. I loved the whole Ryan/Angie journey, it was awesome.
    July 8th, 2008 at 09:00pm
  • Mindless Popsicle;

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    @____________@
    Ths story, was fucking amazing !
    So, yeah. .Wooot ! everything is alright, is all good : )
    I'm happy ! YAY ! : )
    July 8th, 2008 at 03:42am
  • TheTakeover.

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    Aw, I'm sad this is done.
    But an amazing ending none the less.
    :)
    July 7th, 2008 at 07:13pm
  • deleted smiles

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    I don't want it to be over! This was an absolutely fantasic story!
    *bows to you and claps* Brava! Encore, again! :P
    July 7th, 2008 at 05:16am
  • Nicole!

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    i can't belive this only has 3 pages of comments...
    Amazing story :D
    Better than probably most the stories on the whole site
    July 7th, 2008 at 01:43am
  • arizona skies.

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    Aw. Such a nice ending.
    I hope you write an epilogue though. :D
    July 5th, 2008 at 05:54pm
  • erin.whatserface.

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    Aw, it's over!

    First of all, I love that song.
    Mama Cass is spectacular.

    Second of all, that was a really nice, not-overly-dramatic but still substantial ending, and I really liked it.
    :)
    July 5th, 2008 at 03:34pm
  • LoveTheLifeYouLive

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    Aww that was a really nice ending.
    July 5th, 2008 at 11:22am
  • The.Escape.Artist

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    i adore your story and i dont know what do do with myself no that it's over. but it was wonderful while it lasted
    July 5th, 2008 at 10:39am
  • revenge_is_mine

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    oh my god, the end??? what??? well, it was a good ending. Ryan is so precious!! <3
    July 5th, 2008 at 04:02am
  • pretty monsters

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    The...end?
    /cries
    Such a good story.
    How can you have nine stars and only two pages of comments?
    C'mon people, comment this awesome story.
    I really loved this story and I will miss it.
    I may have said this before, but you are my favorite Quizilla/Mibba author.
    July 5th, 2008 at 02:16am