Those Two Guys and That Girl - Comments

Oh and regarding your Logan question, he was previously turned into a cat by magic that the Hunters use. And they aren't in a game but more of a different version of our world that uses magic and things like that. Sorry about the lack of description, we're working on that XD

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When brought to this story, I found the summary a bit bland. I did not understand the game concept written at the end, and didn't know if the characters were in a game or in reality. The summary was not as informative and I found that the 'sentence, turned into a question, another sentence, turned into a question' style was too much like Ping-Pong.

I found the information before each linked chapter very interesting. I liked the information, it helped build the understanding for each chapter. There was good spacing. It was easy to read, and your chapters where a good length. The phrasing could be better, there needs to be more imagery and maybe a heightened diction perhaps... then again that's just being picky.

A Question: Why is logan, a cat, at a bar, speaking? I didn't understand that entire concept, regarding where they were, and how the surroundings were affected by the characters and vice versa.

In short, the story was not my type of genre, but I could see where the plot was going and it is pretty good. Just not my taste, but I see that other viewers like it, so all in all, this was well executed, just a few touch ups needed.

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Why thank you, I was suprised someone had stumbled upon our little story

I like it!:) enjoyed the reading and impressed with the detailing plot and in the chapters. Keep it up hope you read one of mine and give me your advice and comment.

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yup 4 COMMENTS WOOT XD hahaha

yup 4 COMMENTS WOOT XD hahaha

haha we are doing good i say!

I just wanted to congratulate us on 2 recommendation even though... well you know. #CONGRADSANYWAYS!