The Letters - Comments

Where are you!? D:

Aww Gus. That was so sweet of him. Poor Maggie though :( hope she is okay

OH MY GOSH GUS. THAT IS HORRIBLE. Ugh, that frustrated me so much. Wow.
AND THANK YOU FOR THE SHOUT OUT <3 :D

I really hate Gus for that. Wow. It makes me furious. Maggie doesn't understand. Argh.
I'm going to look at your fanfic!

This is such a beautiful story. :)

This is such a special story. Don't stop writing. :)

@ January Rose
Thank you! :-) I'm on spring break for College so I won't update this story until next week. But keep your eye out for a new update! :-)

This is very sweet! I've never read story completly made out of letters, but I love this one! It's so cute bwteeen a 14 year old boy and 7 year old girl. I love their relationship and have spent then past 20 minutes reading all the chapters. The layout really adds to the story and I really adore it! Please keep writing and update soon!

@ Tipsy Returns
Thank you :-)

@ tezza
Thank you for the suggestion! I added time/date on the top of the letters for you. It won't be too obvious because I don't want it to be a crucial part of the storyline but its there for you and other readers if they needed to understand the timeline.

This is the cutest story I've ever read. I think its very very well written! Keep up the great work.

This is a very beautiful story. The letter writing is very unique, creating a very special connection between the reader and the writers. I feel that the thing missing is the typical description of scenery and movements, events and time, etc etc, if that makes sense. Time/date on top of the letters would aid me a lot in reading this, however, it is still perfect as is. It is simplistic and easy to follow, and definitely allows the reader to experience what either Gus or Maggie are feeling. Definitely a great read, and keep up the great work :) I'm recommending and subscribing :)

@ ebony_goddess
Thank you so much!!! :-) I can't put my finger on it either!!! Hopefully the story will improve over time!

I love the idea of the story and was totally hooked. The short letters made it good and all sorts, but like it was missing something somehow. I can't quite put my finger on it, but overall WHY HASN'T ANYONE COMMENTED ON HOW GREAT THIS IS!!???? I mean it's so unique. Love it :)