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  • Wynnie Shawn

    Wynnie Shawn (100)

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    Maybe try changing the summary. You kind of just explain the entire story with all the spoilers in the summary and turns the reader off. Try adding a little mystery to it!
    March 4th, 2014 at 02:52am
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