I like it so far. I'm really excited to see how long they keep their feelings for each other concealed and what it might lead to. Keep it up I look forward to reading more. Also I like the less dialogue thing.
@ defaultmemory Trust me. That is the best Staal. He's ginger, he's a defenseman, and he's a Ranger. Oh, and he wears a beard really well and I love his freckles.