July 7th, 2014 at 10:36am
After reading the first two chapters, I basically fell in love with the plot. I don't usually read fanfiction, but the times that I do, it's usually for anime because it's awesome. But every since I learned about the arrancars, I just loved to read stories about them because they are just so cool.
Anyway, the concept of this story is just, honestly, not what I expected, I guess I can say. It's just so different than the fanfictions that I've ever read, and I have skimmed a whole lot of anime fanfiction. Something I really liked how the first two chapters was how you just began the story with Yuki where she was, already captured by them, without giving any explanation about how she got there and who took her.
Whoa. That. Is. Crazy. I can't believe that she is a Soul Reaper! That's amazing and so surprising at the same time. I just love it so much. That was the craziest plot twist that I've ever read, and oh my gosh. If you couldn't already tell, I absolutely love this story, like so much.
I think I may have read this when it was a oneshot... was it posted here on Mibba?
This is such a cute story with an extremely beautiful layout. You’re an expert with these layouts, I’d say. I’ve read Bleach a long time ago, and I don’t really remember the characters, but I thought Grimmjow dies? Or is he alive in the manga too? I don’t really know.
I love this story to bits. It’s written so beautifully. But there are several grammatical errors, mainly problem with tenses and such. Also at one point, you changed from writing in third person to writing in first person in the middle of the chapter. I guess you should read the chapter once before posting, to avoid confusion.
Overall, this is a wonderful story and I’m definitely subscribing and recommending. I hope to see a good end to this romance as well. I really like the idea of Yuki being Kenpachi’s daughter. I love that guy! So, keep up the great work! :)