Comfort in Sound - Comments

@ house of cards.
Thank you I'm deaf and have been since i was 6 days old. I wrote more of myself into the main character. I actally love watching things i know make sound and imagining what it actually sounds like. :)

@ house of cards.
Thank you I'm deaf and have been since i was 6 days old. I wrote more of myself into the main character. I actally love watching things i know make sound and imagining what it actually sounds like. :)

Summary and Layout

I love the little picture you've included as the banner image. It's cute. Your summary has a certain charm about it, it definitely hooks the reader in.

Content

I think this is a really interesting way to go about the lyrics. I didn't imagine anyone would take the angle of being deaf and turn it into a story like this, but it's nice! I especially like the phrase that talks about taking comfort in the fact that sounds are all around. It's short and sweet, but I like that it shows that the narrator doesn't let their disability get them down - they're living their life as best they can. It's a really sweet story, and a lovely idea. I loved it!

Concrit

I did notice one or two minor grammar things whilst I was reading, so I've listed them below!

too and throw - the phrase should be to and fro

Yet I take comfort in - This paragraph could probably be merged into the paragraph before, I think. Either that or you need to add another blank line between the previous paragraph and that line.

My best Alison - My does't need to be capitalised here.

That was all I noticed. This was lovely, great job!