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  • Foos922

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    That was AHHHH MAZING!!!
    March 18th, 2014 at 07:18am
  • HerSynsPiledToTheSky

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    Told you they'd love it, honey <3
    March 3rd, 2014 at 12:44pm
  • Matt Sanders;

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    Yes it was really good!! Really detailed and I love the detailed stuff! It was amazing :)
    March 2nd, 2014 at 08:14pm
  • JessieWelling

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    Ca20000:
    Wow loved this I wonder what would have happened if zacky came in while they were doing that xxx
    The idea was that she lived in Huntington like Matt and Brian, so Johnny and Zacky lived in different places... but it would be quite interesting if he came in! haha
    Thanks so much for your comment! Mr. Green
    NathanSykes' Swag:
    Holy shit that was fucking awesome. Are you sure this is your first time writing smut? I loved it so much
    I wrote just a bit of it in "Make a wish, babygirl", but since that was the first time EVER I wrote something in English, I didn't go that far. I'm glad you liked it, thanks! Mr. Green
    SHADOWS COURTESAN:
    *Mouth drops open*
    First smut?
    Holy shit
    Hot Damn this is so sexy
    You KNOCKED this out of the park!
    Yes, first smut. I need to thank Olivia Cunning and the Sinners on Tour series for inspiring me hahaha
    Thank you! Mr. Green
    Metalwhore:
    Oh wow, that was HOT!!!
    That can't be your first time writing smut, it's so sexy!
    Please keep it up!!!
    I was completely drained when I finished it, but it came out just like I wanted, so it was worth it... blame my mind for being so graphic! haha
    Thank you for leaving your comment! Mr. Green
    Matt Sanders;:
    Dang that was better than a lot of the smut I hvae read on here. This is really good for a first smut and your English is actually great :)!! I loved it!!
    Thank you!
    That's actually one of the reasons I decided to post this story here, it's not like most of the smut I read on here as well, it's pretty much detailed and explicit. Though I thought it got too long and I thought no one would read it hahaha
    I was also a bit scared because it's been a quite long time since I really used to write something, and now I did in another language which I'm not native. But I guess it went good! Very Happy
    AJ9:
    English is not your first language? Seriously?! I never would've guessed. Honestly. That was really good, and for your first smut, that was incredible! I loved this!! Mr. Green xxx
    It's not, I'm Brazilian! haha and Spanish is also not my first language as most people think...
    Guess it's just because I got used to read books in English. That helped a lot regarding my writing!
    And thank yoooou! Mr. Green

    Guys, seriously, I'm loving all this feedback from you!
    I thought no one would read my OS and I put it in here just because...
    I'm feeling LOVED! Wow
    THANK YOU! Hug
    March 2nd, 2014 at 07:48pm
  • AJ9

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    English is not your first language? Seriously?! I never would've guessed. Honestly. That was really good, and for your first smut, that was incredible! I loved this!! Mr. Green xxx
    March 2nd, 2014 at 07:22pm
  • Matt Sanders;

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    Dang that was better than a lot of the smut I hvae read on here. This is really good for a first smut and your English is actually great :)!! I loved it!!
    March 2nd, 2014 at 02:29am
  • Metalwhore

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    Oh wow, that was HOT!!!
    That can't be your first time writing smut, it's so sexy!
    Please keep it up!!!
    March 1st, 2014 at 10:08pm
  • SHADOWS COURTESAN

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    *Mouth drops open*
    First smut?
    Holy shit
    Hot Damn this is so sexy
    You KNOCKED this out of the park!
    February 28th, 2014 at 11:06pm
  • KaylahJ KAM

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    Holy shit that was fucking awesome. Are you sure this is your first time writing smut? I loved it so much
    February 28th, 2014 at 10:33pm
  • Greenwolf7

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    Wow loved this I wonder what would have happened if zacky came in while they were doing that xxx
    February 28th, 2014 at 09:08pm
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