And Then There Was Us - Comments

  • I KNEW IT! tehe I have special baby detecting powers! XD

    Well, it's safe to say that I'm one big, sobbing mess of emotions after reading that chapter! Brilliantly done, by the way! Gah, this story is making me incredibly broody, I'm gonna have to jump my boyfriend and start practising later, hahaha.

    Her name is perfect, I couldn't think of a better name for her. And Brian, god bless him. I can just tell he's going to freak OUT when Michelle goes into labour! I thought Matt handled everything extremely well. Kudos to him! I'm incredibly proud of them both!

    Quick question, where does the name come from? Cause it sounds Welsh haha.

    Loved it. Can't wait for the next. (Still crying)
    April 26th, 2014 at 05:05pm
  • Yay baby is finally here and it's a girl! I had a feeling and was hoping it would be a girl! And that name is just precious! Super excited for the next update :)
    April 26th, 2014 at 04:35pm
  • YES I KNEW IT! IM A PSYCHIC! CUTE BABY GIRL WOOHOO!

    She did it, god she held out good! 23 long, exhausting hours which would have seemed longer because she was trying to push out a watermelon. God, Matt must have been so proud of her right then. You wrote the birth beautifully, and more so, realistically.

    “Oh my God!” Matt said, his voice high-pitched and weird. “He’s here, McKenna. Oh my God, it’s our son.” Matt, you've gone and made me cry! Oh god. I can just imagine the look on his face right about now. Emry James? That's such a unique name, but so very fitting! James after Jimmy. Now I'm bawling like a kid. Gosh. It suits so much.

    1.25 MILLION?! God, they're lucky their musicians!

    BRIAN YOU ADORABLE BABY! HE MUST BE SO NERVOUS AND FULL OF EXCITEMENT SINCE THIS IS THE LONGEST THAT HE AND MICHELLE HAVE GOTTEN! I can't wait until they have their baby. Which, I think may be a bouncing baby boy!

    Aw, you're doing so well with this! I'm loving every sentence!
    April 26th, 2014 at 04:16pm
  • IT's a girl!!!

    I knew that it was going to be a girl and I loved the update!! I can't wait to read more and I love the name Emry and it makes me all giddy becuase my sister is going to have another and I wont be here for it!! So this kind of makes up for it!! They are both so amazing in this story!! I can't wait to read more!!

    Loved it!
    April 26th, 2014 at 03:55pm
  • Baww, OMG this was just too cute.

    I am glad that you didn't rush it. In the end it was just beautiful. I love the name you used for the baby. Now I can't wait for Michelle to have her baby. They all make such a cute family. I mean I can just picture them all in my head and it makes me smile.

    More soon please?
    April 26th, 2014 at 03:05pm
  • I love that it was a little girl :) every moment of this chapter was wonderful from start to finish!!! I can't wait to see more of them as a little family :) and I can't wait for Michelle to have her baby too!! I want to see them just as happy :) you have made me fall so in love with this pairing <3
    April 26th, 2014 at 02:59pm
  • I didn't cry until I read the name...perfect
    April 26th, 2014 at 02:22pm
  • I knew it was going to be a girl, I mean how could mother nature not throw them a curve ball? I love the way you wrote about her after birth. How in love they are with her and steal her to themselves for as long as they possibly can before the rest of the fam comes in. So so in love.
    April 26th, 2014 at 02:11pm
  • This chapter was just adorable! :') and YAY! A girl! :)
    April 26th, 2014 at 12:56pm
  • Loved the chapter.
    It's a girl, they didn't expect it... But they sure seem happy about it.
    I have to say, I loved the name Emry. Never heard it before, but it fit her.
    Emry James.
    You did such a good job on this chapter, and the whole story and prequel.
    Can't wait to read more :)
    April 26th, 2014 at 12:55pm
  • Awwww shes a chapter a way from becoming mama !! So excited !
    April 26th, 2014 at 12:51am
  • I love the way you're writing out the birth. I actually really appreciate how descriptive your writing of this part is, most people dont take the time to research or go into detail, so this is amazing and refreshing. Super excited for the next chapter!!! :)))
    April 24th, 2014 at 02:59am
  • I'm loving this! The way you've written this is just so realistic. I'm so looking forward to the arrival of baby Sanders. Please update soon xx Mr. Green
    April 23rd, 2014 at 11:19pm
  • Ahhhhh, I'm loving these chapters but your killing me with the cliff hangers. I'm dying to know if she did intact have a boy or if Brian Sr. and Grandma Haner were right that its a girl.

    Thank god for Zacky and his advise to calm Matt down, you can really tell that he said just to be a good friend to Matt which is what he needed.

    Loved the part with Sr. and Mac with him telling her the story about her birth again. I love when families do that, I know my own tell me all the time.

    Once again can't wait to read the next one and find out what they have and name it.
    April 23rd, 2014 at 07:06pm
  • I love Papa Gates! XD

    Poor Matt, he may look calm & collected on the outside but on the inside he is freaking out. Since he is stressed out & would do anything for McKenna he is gonna cry like a baby when the baby is born.

    I'm just gonna go with my gut telling me that it's hopefully gonna be a girl. I just hope that it is & I love how u are writing this to make it look an sound real like an actual birth. I have read stories on here about how they are all rushed and haven't actually take the time to make it real. Props to u!

    I also can't wait to read about Brian's baby. That is the other one that I am waiting for. We also know that Brian is having a girl, I just can't wait to read his reaction to when Michelle gives birth.

    Can't wait for the next chapter!! xx
    April 23rd, 2014 at 06:51pm
  • Awww everyone is being so sweet. I love how Papa Gates told everyone to fuck off. Matt's been awesome and I love how Zacky gave him advice on what not to do. I can't wait to read more and find out more about the baby!
    April 23rd, 2014 at 06:18pm
  • I think I cried when I read Papa Gates' story! Oh my god, he's such a proud daddy! And he would be today, three kick-ass talented kids, one super awesome, equally as talented wife; damn, he must have a field-day! Haha. Goddamn, Suze, ease up a little there hot-shot. She's always been an energetic, strong-willed one! XD hahah PG telling everyone to fuck off, oh go.

    Yes, hello, I'd like to order 10 of Matt please and thankyou! He's such a loving husband and so fucking empathetic, god, he's going to be the perfect daddy and I know he'll literally bawl when he sees his baby. He'll probably end up crying during the labour, ignoring the advice of wise-old Zachary.

    WHY WOULD YOU SHRUG, DAMMIT?! Facepalm

    Oh god, sixteen hours of absolute hell. Must be tough, stuck on eight for so damn long... I really like how you're setting it out and the pace of the story, it's true to an actual labour which I really love, so props to you! I'm still going with my gut that it'll be a bouncing baby boy. But, if they were to have a girl, she'd be daddy's princess for sure! Haha XD
    April 23rd, 2014 at 03:24pm
  • Papa Gates to the rescue! :D Haha.

    Dammit Suzy, I know you want to see your daughter, that you're probably worried about her, but she doesn't need you crowding up the room like that!

    Awwww, what a sweet little story! Dad always has your back, no matter what happens! Poor Matt, he's just about holding on himself. Bless him, he's so attentive to her! It's sweet.

    Poor girl, sixteen hours of labour sounds horrible! And they're still not out of the woods yet. I'm really happy that you paced this out, that it wasn't all over within a few hours. I know some women have easy births, but a lot don't. My mum said she was in labour for 28 hours with me, I guess I was comfy where I was haha.

    Haha, that was funny, Brian ducking his head in, to be told straight away to get ice and chocolate XD

    If she wanted a milkshake shaped like a banana, he would do everything in his power to give it to her. Hahahaha!

    Oh my god, I can't believe Zack just shrugged at Gena, damn right she would have been pissed! Haha. Awww, now it's Zack to the rescue! Haha

    Awww yayyy, the end is in sight! I can't wait to see what they have, what they name him or her. I'm still going with my gut that it's gonna be a girl, cause all the way through, they've both thought it was a boy haha. I'm looking forward to Matt having a little meltdown, too. It's gonna happen, the guy is so emotional, bless him. I think he'll be crying like a baby! (Pun intended). I can't wait for Brian's, either, I think that will be funny!

    Haha, just the one comment this time, I double checked which button I pressed before blinding hitting at my touchpad like last time! XD
    April 23rd, 2014 at 03:15pm
  • Ah! Baby Sanders is almost here!!!! So excited!:D
    April 23rd, 2014 at 03:13pm
  • AHHHHHHHHHH!!!! I wanted to scream when I got to the end of this!!!! I will say, I like how Matt's freaking out and all the already Daddy's are telling him to calm the fuck down basically.

    Also, I understand that you want to keep to your way of writing. So I'm being patient as possible for the next chapter.
    April 23rd, 2014 at 03:11pm