I really like this so far. I haven't read many strict father against gay/African-American people stories, but I'm excited to read yours. I already know so much about the main character from the first chapter because of how much detail you poured into the story. You're an amazing writer.
I love the title of this, because it's really creative and the layout is very pretty! Anyways, I think the idea is awesome. It kind of reminds me of footloose, with the religious father and how badly Grace wants to get away. And I think it's great so far! I like it :D