THE FACT THAT THAT WAS A GRRAT ENDING DOES NOTHING TO HELP THE FAVT THAT I LOVE THIS STORY AND IM EFFJNG DEPRESSED THAT ITS OVER omg
I love the whole standing up thing.. it made me really happy. and you really did a great job witht the final paragraphs.<3 I just wish it didn't have to be over:(((
XD XD XD love this and I'm very pumped for next chapter! although I'm not so psyched that Lucas seems to know about Gerard and frank,... but frank did an amazing job of taking care of that (which btw you wrote very well.. often fight scenes end up being really choppy or "he hit him, he hit him back" situations, so good job because yours definitely wasn't!<3
Okay, I'm done. But seriously, that was fucking delicious. I got perfect visuals, and you made me want to draw dirtydirty dirty things. Which is also fucking delicious. So thanks for that:) Can't wait for the next update! But I don't want it to end:( But I realize that the main plot line is over and it kinda has to end here soon, but that doesn't mean I want it to. ... This could technically go on forever, you know!;) I love this story so much.<3<3
PS. The way you write sex is perfect (focusing equally on the physical and emotional aspects). Keep it up, girl. I hope there's more of that in the final chapters:D
lovetloveitloveit! also I love how adorable they both are and how much they already seem to trust each other. you're doing a really really really great job^_^ please update again soooon!!
@ ShotToRemember yeah that makes sense, but I'm just a state over in Minnesota and we just legalized same sex marriage so it's not as prevalent in my life.
@ Helena Hathaway it all depends though, really. yeah, most frerards do have homophobic parents involved and it does get tiresome after awhile, but I, living in South Dakota of all places, practically the capital of conservatism, see the realism in it because like 95% of people here are homophobic:'( still though, I'm happy franks dad isn't!:D that's the main thing here:)
@ ShotToRemember yeah well most Frerards have that one aspect where someones parent is a homophobe, and I just don't buy it. Like, my parents never were, and I think it's unrealistic. Also I'm sick of fanfictions needing to be tragic, you know, like I just want a cheesy rom-com style story.